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Yellow Tranquility

In the pale mist of dawn, a rower glides quietly across a creamy, yellow lake in a golden glow. An ethereal fog settles dreamily over the waters as muted paddles create rippled works of art. Written on 3/3/2016

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Date: 3/6/2016 12:44:00 PM
very lovely use imagery, Laura. Congrats in the contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Date: 3/6/2016 6:47:00 AM
Laura Many congratulations on your WIN.......:-)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Sathya :)
Date: 3/6/2016 12:05:00 AM
Congratulations Laura on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you, Hansteven:)
Date: 3/5/2016 12:47:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in your winning entry Laura. Congratulations on your fabulous win! #7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Connie, and for the rating, too :)
Date: 3/4/2016 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest yellow win, Laura !Hugs dear friend
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Eve :)
Date: 3/4/2016 5:25:00 PM
Very beautiful picture you paint, Laura. No photo needed. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Peace young lady:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2016 6:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Daniel! You are sweet :)
Date: 3/4/2016 4:17:00 PM
Laura, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Laura :)
Date: 3/4/2016 2:29:00 PM
I was pretty sure I would be sending my congratulations your way. Well done Laura
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2016 4:59:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Charlie :) And congrats to you, too :)
Date: 3/4/2016 5:14:00 AM
absolutely beautiful imagery Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2016 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! I loved your poem, too :)
Date: 3/4/2016 12:49:00 AM
Laura, B E A U T I F U L such a dreamy yellow poem, wonderfully penned, I am loving this 7~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic Rose :)
Date: 3/3/2016 9:26:00 PM
Well done Laura. Best wishes in the contest...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/4/2016 12:12:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Charlie. I'm glad you liked it :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/3/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Charlie. I'm glad you liked it :)

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