Yellow Green Star

One yellow green star Above horizon In southeastern sky As sun cracks The dawn Gogyohka form

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Robin Davis

Date: 6/10/2014 10:02:00 PM

Sara This is such a beautifully described picture of wonder and serenity. Thank you for the great comment on my Zombie poem.

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/28/2012 8:49:00 PM

Nice poem of sweet imagination worded wonderfully. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2012 9:19:00 PM

Sara, this is the image of all images today... the sun cracking down on dawn,,, love the horizon,,.. enjoyed your tanka* Goodnight! Always~ PD

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/27/2012 5:28:00 PM

Sara, Sara, this is simply lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/27/2012 2:33:00 PM

It is your "lucky star" Sara! - Gorgeous. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Omneya Kamal

Date: 10/27/2012 12:39:00 PM

Really loved it Sara, I visualized this tanka and enjoyed what I saw. Love, Omneya

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/27/2012 12:35:00 PM

Sara; This is a very nice Tanka that you have written. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/27/2012 12:04:00 PM

Wow! I never heard of this form; sounds wonderful! The rhythm is so powerful!Also thank you for stopping by! I am from Madagascar, in the Indian Ocean, near Mauritius and La Réunion. Yes, we always have long names: our parents' projects and desires...:) Just call me Hanitra (=scent, perfume). Love!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/27/2012 11:43:00 AM

This is a wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! Incredibly spectacular piece Sara, wonderfully done, Great Work!!