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Yellow Green Star

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Yellow Green Star

One yellow green star Above horizon In southeastern sky As sun cracks The dawn
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  1. Date: 6/10/2014 10:02:00 PM
    Sara This is such a beautifully described picture of wonder and serenity. Thank you for the great comment on my Zombie poem.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 8:49:00 PM
    Nice poem of sweet imagination worded wonderfully. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:19:00 PM
    Sara, this is the image of all images today... the sun cracking down on dawn,,, love the horizon,,.. enjoyed your tanka* Goodnight! Always~ PD

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:28:00 PM
    Sara, Sara, this is simply lovely!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:33:00 PM
    It is your "lucky star" Sara! - Gorgeous. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:20:00 PM
    Venus, the evening star? Lovely done, Sara! Have a nice day. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 12:39:00 PM
    Really loved it Sara, I visualized this tanka and enjoyed what I saw. Love, Omneya

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 12:35:00 PM
    Sara; This is a very nice Tanka that you have written. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 12:04:00 PM
    Wow! I never heard of this form; sounds wonderful! The rhythm is so powerful!Also thank you for stopping by! I am from Madagascar, in the Indian Ocean, near Mauritius and La Réunion. Yes, we always have long names: our parents' projects and desires...:) Just call me Hanitra (=scent, perfume). Love!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 11:43:00 AM
    This is a wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! Incredibly spectacular piece Sara, wonderfully done, Great Work!!