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8/7/8/7/8/7 Yellow eyes blink, centered on fear They move sideways, ups and downs Waiting for future, peace of meat Huddled in the dark cranny Faint moon falls on slurring shadows Converging on a puddle Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Contest Name NIGHT CREATURES No.3. Coyote Sponsor nette onclaud

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Date: 1/18/2015 1:51:00 AM
A very menacing description of the coyote. I've chosen to write about the same night creature... I really enjoyed your take on the contest theme! Good luck to you, Rajat!
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Date: 1/15/2015 6:19:00 AM
Wishing you the best for the contest Rajat :)
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Date: 1/15/2015 12:32:00 AM
A scary image of a night creature, Rajat! I haven't checked out this contest. It looks interesting...best wishes...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/14/2015 4:57:00 PM
very interesting description for those coyotes. You only need to say up and down, without 's. Good luck in the contest, sure looks like a fun one.
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Date: 1/14/2015 4:50:00 PM
Your bird of prey has come to life in these few words, Rajat! Lovely imagery! Well done my friend! #7 // paul
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Date: 1/14/2015 4:36:00 PM
Wow...loved the imagery my friend....Tim
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Date: 1/14/2015 11:35:00 AM
Well, that sent chills through my spine. A vibrant image that's earned a '7'.
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