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Yellow Day Lily

Yellow day lily's bloom Tightly pinched the blossom Against the morning's cold Last bud of summer Soon 'oar's frost will close
Gogyohka form

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  1. Date: 6/15/2014 10:02:00 AM
    Sara A very nice poem with imagery and imagination that lets the reader actually visualize this scene. thank you for the great comment on my Red Riding Hood poem.

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Sara, you must be at one with nature, your poetry is truly inspiring

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 11:32:00 PM
    beautiful and well-knit artpiece, sara... love the way the last line allows the imagination to drift... my winning bet.. :) huggs

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 1:52:00 PM
    hi Sara Great tanka very visual can see it in my mind, thanks for this uplifting moment, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 12:07:00 PM
    You are enjoying these Gogyoka poems my friend! I know you like the Tanka-ish look without the syllable requirements! I enjoy the challenge of the syllable requirements myself, makes for an interesting write, but the Gogyoka form is very free! This is a fantastic write Sara, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! Quite the special and enlightening poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:11:00 AM
    Yes, I really like this. Reminds me of my poor roses in recent snow!! Yellow so pretty.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 7:20:00 AM
    Here is already the snow and frost arrived, nothing reminiscent of summer - Thanks for a little heat from your poem Sara, lovely written. - Have a great Sunday. - oxox / / huggs .... Anne-Lise :)