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Yellow Dresses

YELLOW DRESSES Joy springs sudden and silent From the simplest of childish roots. Homebound from work to metro along a city way I saw today on one of my regular stops The overgrowth of dandelions from the sun, Very tall and reaching through the iron railing, Wind catching them waving happily, Like angelic little girls all standing tall on tip-toe, Trying to attract my attention and saying “Look at me, Isn’t my bright yellow dress the prettiest?” And indeed each one was beautiful - It was too hard to choose. I felt like a god with these tiny saffron Seraphim Looking for my admiration and recognition: For their tireless, glowing energy, Joyfully jostling and basking in my approval. Sometimes a child simply calls dandelions dandies: And today I suddenly felt the meaning deepen. They were in truth all dandies, and I smiled - I smiled silently all the way home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/11/2014 7:27:00 PM
It's been too long Syd I have so missed your company & your verse, I was beyond happy this was YOU, you could give lessons in SHOWING versus telling [OH yes you do give lessons! ;)] Hug T for me. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 7/11/2014 4:58:00 PM
Simply breathtaking and moved across the page with a pulse Love Cookie
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Date: 7/11/2014 3:04:00 PM
Sidney, please accept my congratulations on being awarded the TOP win! Wonderful write!
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:50:00 PM
Sidney, loved this magical, whimsical take on the contest. Just beautiful, Congratulations.
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:00:00 PM
Wow!! Love the simplicity jolliness of this ..:) congratulations!! :D
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Date: 7/11/2014 8:19:00 AM
Beautiful, Sidney! I especially love the last line of the first verse. Congrats on top win!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/11/2014 7:19:00 AM
This wonderful Sidney...congrats on the win..hugs
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Date: 7/11/2014 6:45:00 AM
Wonderful. all that is missing is the sound of the children in the school yard. Great win.
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Date: 7/11/2014 4:25:00 AM
Priceless.. congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/11/2014 4:00:00 AM
Most beautiful indeed Sidney! Congrats on first place win!
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:00:00 AM
This is beautiful Sidney. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Verlena
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Date: 7/6/2014 3:11:00 PM
Hi Sidney, this is such a beautiful write. I truly enjoyed this yellow gem!
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Date: 7/5/2014 6:18:00 PM
I still love dandelion 'clocks' and the childhood memories they hold. really enjoyed this write. hugs Jan xxx
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