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This is inspired by the contest of my loving friend, Andrea Dietrich.

Flowers smile so bright They will touch your lonely heart Gentle wind whispers Fragrance of hope is on air God’s sweetest love everywhere May 15, 2013 12.10 am Honorable Mention Contest: Tanka Me A Color Judged: 5/20/13 Sponsor: Poet Andrea Dietrich

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Edward Orozco

Date: 10/19/2013 9:03:00 PM

Awesome piece!! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2013 4:14:00 PM

a happy cheer from me to you. thanks for embracing God's love and gentle whisper through your poem...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2013 10:34:00 PM

I am smiling so bright like a flower. yellow always seems to take me out of my gloomy world. A nice tanka sis, God's amazing and thank you for sharing the best sunny side of him... xox~ Linda

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/22/2013 7:24:00 AM

Many congrats for this great win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2013 11:10:00 AM

leonora, you stun me..congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

Donna Jones

Date: 5/21/2013 9:55:00 AM

Leonora, I loved this beautiful poem...congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2013 1:03:00 AM

Leonora, this is adorable!!! Glad to see you on my winners' list. Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2013 9:12:00 PM

Hi, Leo... i like the smell of this sweet perfume in your poem. A graceful flower of hope. i love the essences in your poem, it is very gentle like the color yellow. It makes me wonder if yellow's your favorite color.... I love reading this poem over and over... CONGRATULATIONS, in Andrea's contest..... XOX~ Linda

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/20/2013 8:15:00 PM

We both wrote about yellow..all great minds..lol. love your sweet poem. congrats. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2013 2:55:00 PM

Hello Leo,... aweeee... this is nice smiling bright with your flower. I love the pouring of God's love... an amazing write of light... LINDA

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/19/2013 8:56:00 AM

Lovely write Leonara, yellow's my fav colour as I like to be bright, don't always acheive it! but can but try. Thanks for sharing, have blessed day, hope its bright in SA, here its dull and dreary, Blessing, Gordon

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/17/2013 10:48:00 AM

Well done... Best wishes. AO

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/16/2013 5:18:00 PM

seems that visiting one's homeland sends off the glow of yelllow, leonora... this is a delicately woven write so well scribed.. glow, glow... miss ya!..:) huggs

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 5/16/2013 9:41:00 AM

very lovely poem my dear friend..soothing to the soul...I'm back to reality!! my grand vacation was over (27 days) now its time to focused myself in teaching..miss you my friend..God bless you always!! Love and hug, maria

Red Omara

Date: 5/15/2013 8:59:00 PM

Very lovely very few words, Leonora. Assume this one is meant for Andrea's contest? Would think it will do well.-Red

Donna Jones

Date: 5/15/2013 5:42:00 PM

Leonora...this is lovely...about one of my favorite colors...

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/14/2013 2:58:00 PM

Oh, the tenderness and gentleness of this write is truly phenomenal My favorite line has to be the, "Gentle wind whispers" the words of that small phrase are wonderful my friend! What a fantastic piece Leonora, such a dynamic poem, Great work!!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/14/2013 1:20:00 PM

So many beautiful Tanka poems i've read for this contest, and I especially love yours. I think it will be a winner Leonora. Wishing you good luck in Andrea's contes. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2013 11:52:00 AM

- Another beautiful poem - Yellow is the color of smiles. - Always enjoyable to read your poems Leonora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)