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the sun’s warmth
on my face
a smile
  free at last

for andrea's color tanka contest

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  1. Date: 6/4/2013 4:50:00 PM
    I love the warm feeling this poem brings with it!! Charming! And ps.....a big thank you for my placement in your senryu contest. You had such wonderful entries, so I am honored. Thank you!!

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:19:00 AM
    Beautiful Many congrats for this great win.

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 11:00:00 AM
    you are sunshine, susan..congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:13:00 AM
    Congratulation on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:12:00 AM
    short but sweet, congrats on your win Susan

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 8:50:00 AM
    Unique winning work..Creative way to go..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:13:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win Susan, well done xx

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 12:52:00 AM
    I really love how you ended yours, susan, and I appreciate your modern way of doing your tanka. I do adore that yellow sun on my face and you guessed that so well about me. congrats. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:16:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Susan

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:02:00 PM
    this is an awesome choice of YELLOW, for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:07:00 PM
    I can feel the warmth...congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 2:37:00 PM
    Like it much....Thanks

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 2:33:00 PM
    Yellow is the color in my hand. a ball with rays over the land free at last.