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Yellow

yellow the sun’s warmth on my face a smile free at last 5/11/13 for andrea's color tanka contest

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Carrie Richards

Date: 6/4/2013 4:50:00 PM

I love the warm feeling this poem brings with it!! Charming! And ps.....a big thank you for my placement in your senryu contest. You had such wonderful entries, so I am honored. Thank you!!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/22/2013 7:19:00 AM

Beautiful Many congrats for this great win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2013 11:00:00 AM

you are sunshine, susan..congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/21/2013 9:13:00 AM

Congratulation on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/21/2013 9:12:00 AM

short but sweet, congrats on your win Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2013 8:50:00 AM

Unique winning work..Creative way to go..Congrats...Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/21/2013 1:13:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Susan, well done xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2013 12:52:00 AM

I really love how you ended yours, susan, and I appreciate your modern way of doing your tanka. I do adore that yellow sun on my face and you guessed that so well about me. congrats. Luv, Andrea