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It's early sunday morning and the sun has started it's shine I look outside to notice the neighbors drinking a holiday wine there sits their son, to young to join having sweat stream down his face shining like brand new coins already experiencing a taste, he stared unable to tell the stress he bared He's had his first drink and now he's scared.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/11/2013 9:16:00 AM
Drinking doesn't cure the stress nor make it go away only makes things worse..Possibly creating a person who will become an alcoholic..Enjoyed reading this very descriptive and expressive work this morn..Sara
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