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Yellow, Yearn, Yet, Yesterday Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France written 4/14/2024

"Nature’s sermon laced with bouquet lusciousness of colors and fragrance unfolds spiritual inspiration." Quote by poet Lingering lazy moon A luster on the eve of June Plays a peace-making tune As butterfly wings soon Emerge from its cocoon. Yellow bumblebees prefer to dine And promenade upon fine Yellow black-eyed Susan vine. Zigzagging playfully always align Sweet flora ambrosia most divine. Wakeful dawn first breath light Fluttering bird’s wings flight Under breaking clouds height. Good-bye! Good-bye out of sight Natures harmony and rhythm plight.

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Constance La France

Date: 4/22/2024 5:35:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this magical poem, I love your quote too, Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2024 1:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2024 12:10:00 PM

- A beautiful poem, Eve :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/19/2024 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win. You deserve it. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/19/2024 9:56:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Yellow" Rhyme write. Have a great weekend with your win......................

Tonye George

Date: 4/18/2024 7:45:00 AM

Nice quotes. I love the end rhymes, it was a lovely read. "Nature's harmony and rhythm plight." I'm sure it soars so high. Cheers Eve.

David Smith

Date: 4/17/2024 1:48:00 PM

Yellow sees our garden through winter. Marigolds once planted refuse to say goodbye. Another example of your talent here. Enjoy rest of week, David in NZ

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/15/2024 5:16:00 PM

loved your quote...and your poem was full of the lusciousness you mentioned in your quote. Yellow is my favorite color and you brought in some examples I didn't think of. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/15/2024 1:44:00 AM

Superb poem that deserves high praise. I'm sure it will place high. Hugs xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/15/2024 12:58:00 AM

Beautiful poetry, loved this! :)