Yellow

It’s my first reigning color dazzling around my dance floor It brightens my mind and soul from its most attractive call. Giving me smiles every morning that’s sunshine--warm and refreshing In my garden are great delights favorite flowers shine so bright! Just across my garden fence are golden showers-- so dense At the gate are big sunflowers with yellow bells are real stunners! Come and pick some marigolds, goldenrods and daffodils, behold! While gardening, I wear yellow dress with gold jewelries, no more no less. Yellow is my new time favorite Brilliant color, so lovely and sweet If you take yellow from my outfit I’ll whine, walk out and finally quit. sixth of May 2023 3.41pm Writing Challenge “ Y” Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Verified at rhymezone and howmanysyllables.com 112 words 161 syllables 664 characters Writing Challenge - 'Y 'Words Contest Judged: 5/10/2023 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Constance La France Place:HM (up to HM multi-w)

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2023 1:14:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Leonora :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 5/11/2023 3:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting wors and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. I was still inspired by the contest although this is already my second poem on yellow. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs. I'll be back to visit you all here so soon dear ok.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/11/2023 9:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Yellow" is a wonderful write. "Yellow" is filled with sunshine/smiles. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Len Gasun
Date: 5/11/2023 3:53:00 PM

I agree my dear poet friend. Yellow is filled with sunshine and smiles. Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Paula. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Constance La France

Date: 5/11/2023 7:19:00 AM

Len, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge. !

Len Gasun
Date: 5/11/2023 3:50:00 PM

My pleasure my dear poet friend Constance. Thank you so much as well too for the inspiration. This is my second poem on yellow. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/10/2023 11:07:00 PM

Hi Len, Congratulations on your HM. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Len Gasun
Date: 5/11/2023 1:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings dear poet friend Alexis Young. Blessings. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/7/2023 1:33:00 AM

Beautiful yellow flowers. Best for a win.

Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2023 3:13:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words and wishes my dear poet friend. Blessings always. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 5/6/2023 2:50:00 PM

Excellent entry for the contest, Len. Yellow is my favorite color for flowers for our flowers beds. Good luck in the contest, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2023 12:11:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Bill. Good luck too especially in all your writing endeavors. God bless you always and your writings. I'll visit you so soon if you don't mind ok. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 5/6/2023 3:23:00 AM

the colour of sunshine is so uplifting like your poem Len:-) hugs jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2023 12:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comment my dear poet friend Jan. Nice to see you back here at PS. I'll visit you so soon if you don't mind. Thank you very mch. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs