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Yearning For Home

My heart yearns; I'm missing home ~ missing home... A warm loving womb for my heart and soul; For better future life, I left and roam. Gem mosaic roles ladder a top goal; Like one live music band we rock and roll; Laughter and tears shed shadows every dome Changes marked between years, I miss to match... My heart yearns; I'm missing home~ missing home... Dreams upholded round high from pearl deep catch Each fiber of my heart 'til death attach. (c) Olive Eloisa 2:51pm: June 30,2014 Quintain (English) rhyme scheme: ababb (which I chose.. :O?) Quintain (Sicilian) rhyme scheme: ababa Sponsor Dr.Ram Mehta Contest Name Hard Choices 6th place, to God be the greatest glory.. :)

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James Fraser

Date: 12/10/2014 12:31:00 PM

Another wonderful write Olive. I've fallen in love with your poetry - James :)x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/10/2014 10:43:00 PM

thanks much JAmes.. :)!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:57:00 PM

thank you for supporting my comments always

Greg Hoffman

Date: 7/5/2014 9:58:00 AM

Congrats on your win,nicely done

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/6/2014 4:45:00 AM

THANK YOU VERY much.. :)

Ct Duet

Date: 7/4/2014 11:14:00 AM

Congrats on the sweet win :)...many hugs from a far :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/6/2014 4:44:00 AM

tHANK YOU .. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2014 9:57:00 AM

Olive,, Congratulations, life's all about the hard choices we face on a daily base. Have a happy 4th of July... LUV LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2014 10:32:00 AM

Thank You Lolli Linda.. :D belated likewise.. :) i hope you will be happy always.. :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/4/2014 9:40:00 AM

True Olive ! A beauty , home sweet home !congrats on great win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2014 10:29:00 AM

i hope so Dr. Upma that i'll be home soon... :D

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/4/2014 8:25:00 AM

A unique write on the Hard Choices and fine Rhyming, Congrats on the win in my contest, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2014 10:28:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram.. :) God bless you. :D

Tim Smith

Date: 6/30/2014 11:48:00 PM

I can only imagine how difficult it is to be away....hugs to you my sweet :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 6:10:00 AM

:) have you tried Tim.? Hugs too ..:) thanks much..:)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/30/2014 11:36:00 PM

This is such a beautiful poem I think anyone who has been away from home for long time can relate too!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 6:09:00 AM

Oh yes Buddy Art..:) have you once be away? Thanks for the drop by..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/30/2014 6:23:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi...love the write and the yearning behind it. I can understand. May you soon be able to return home and reunite with loved ones whom you miss so much. This is not an impossible dream!:)) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 7/4/2014 3:30:00 PM

Congratulations on another worthy win Olive_eloi :) time to celebrate!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 6:08:00 AM

Yes not so impossible dream Paul...:) but I mean more than the home itself and the situation itself..:) remember.. Home is where the heart is...........;)

Leon Datu

Date: 6/30/2014 12:44:00 PM

I am softened by your need to come home. Bittersweet poetry likened to country music!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 6:04:00 AM

Thank you for your drop by..:)