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you said you always wanted someone that would stay by your side but when i tried.... you left mine you said you wanted someone that would be there through thick and thin and i was.... no matter what you did you said you wanted someone that you could call your wife but.... i was willing to give you my life i stayed by your side through thick and thin i gave you my life.... but look how it ends.

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Date: 9/24/2008 7:10:00 PM
I really liked your poem, and the way you wrote it. The words in the poem remind me of something i might write about. I like when I find poems that say what i try to say in my poems.
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Date: 8/4/2008 6:15:00 AM
Rebecca - Often what people say and do are totally different - You know that when ever one part of our life ends a new one begins - Did you read my poem "One Second" its off the hook - Stay Strong
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