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Yasmin the Fair

Across the sea she waits unfree and writes of her friendships and of true harmony. Her children and loyalty keep her from flight a poet matron married for her great beauty. Her mind soars and eyes devour old tomes. learning to write odes and etherees she leaves her shell for foreign homes delighting in words of camaraderie. The heat of Saudi, the thrill of Mumbai the feel of silk saris under gray skies all of these does she gift to such as I and from her captive perch we hear her cry. May the written word always be the key which brings our fairest Yasmin here to me. *A tribute verse to the budding skill of Yasmin Khan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/12/2012 6:37:00 PM
Congrats, Deb. Awesome. Great job, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 7/12/2012 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Francine's "Tribute By Sonnet" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2012 3:20:00 AM
Debbie, congrats on your win, an excellent choice of poet to do a dedication to...David
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Date: 7/11/2012 10:47:00 PM
congrats Debbie on your 9th place win with this tribute to our soup's beautiful Yasmin
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Date: 6/25/2012 5:05:00 PM
How can one not be heartwarmed when reading this poem, and then to read Yasmin's response....brought a tear! :)
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Date: 6/18/2012 12:14:00 PM
I just read Cyndi's note about this poem below mine...I echo her thots too! Great job!
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Date: 6/18/2012 12:13:00 PM
Debbie,...Yasmin's growth is def something that is easy to see, but when the words come from someone as encouraging and as experienced as you, how could she not grow ? You have held up her poetry pen like Aaron to Moses on many occasions...I just feel it in my bones...You are one of her inspirations and mentors...Bless u for your impact on us all. Love ya Debbie...Gwendolen
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Date: 6/16/2012 8:29:00 AM
Oh, Debbie. This is wonderful. Such a perfect rendering! When great words match intention, spirit, loving thoughts, to me this makes the BEST poetry. Hugs to both of you! Cyndi
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Date: 6/15/2012 1:36:00 PM
WOW!!A great tribute to her!
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Date: 6/15/2012 7:00:00 AM
Deb, a great sonnet, and who could be a more worthy recipient....good luck...David
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Date: 6/14/2012 9:28:00 PM
a fitting, flowing tribute to one of my "bestest" friends here on soup, debbie... yes, she's a powerhouse!... shimmering!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/14/2012 7:34:00 PM
A WONDERFUL TRIBUTE,, TO A WELL LOVED POET FRIENDS OF MINE,,I HOPE.... XOX..PD
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Date: 6/14/2012 2:34:00 PM
A beautiful poem for sweet Yasmin, hope she like it to. - oxox Anne-Lise
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