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In those early years, growing up in the country Walking barefoot, on old gravel roads With neighborhood friends, a dog or two Pulling a wagon of pop bottle gold We were pirates, marauders, searching for treasure In the ditches, as we walked, to the store In simpler days, with much simpler ways Soon, to pass in, to folklore It had an old screen door, with a long squeaky spring Which greeted you as you entered Slapping shut behind you, with a distinctive, CLAP! Bringing the storekeeper front and center While the old man figured, what was already known We each grabbed a little paper sack Just like 49'ers, digging for gold We mined the penny candy rack The thick gray planks, were buckled from age Some held by a single nail A few odd chairs, scattered about Hosts to many an exaggerated tale So many memories from that old porch Telling stories and eating ice cream Counting the cars, on the passing freight trains Each one, hauling a different dream Over a half a century, since those boyhood days But I can still hear that clicketty-clack Still taste the penny candy, see the old man smile Hear him say," Thank you and ya'll come back. by Daniel Turner

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Date: 3/15/2017 5:56:00 AM
A fantastic piece DT of times past that are priceless. Corner stores are becoming rarer by the day..your poem reminded me of a couple from my childhood, buying roe for fishing, butter to bring to grandma's house.:-) Nostalgia suits you... this is wonderful.:-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
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Date: 1/29/2017 11:46:00 AM
Wonderful write, Daniel, I remember some of these old buildings and the sound of the door closing.... brought back memories . Hugs
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Date: 2/20/2017 10:34:00 AM
Funny the things we remember, isn't it, Mrs Eve:) Thank you so much for the friendly visits.
Date: 1/29/2017 5:56:00 AM
To bad we seem to have been the last generation to be able to truly appreciate the small stuff----to put a penny on the tracks----one should see Lincoln's face---It's a "7" my friend
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Date: 2/20/2017 10:33:00 AM
We used to find the little pieces on black metal banding around the tracks. You could fold them in half and make a whistle out of them. Great memories! Thank you, Jerry:)
Date: 1/28/2017 4:29:00 PM
You just took me back to my childhood days Daniel. Dad ran a music store and Mum a pharmacy. Both small shops like the one you describe here. Nice reminiscing.
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Date: 2/20/2017 10:26:00 AM
It's great, isn't it? Those old memories have lasted a long time and get sweeter by the day. Thank you, Jean:)
Date: 1/28/2017 11:01:00 AM
Deelightful! And a really good day was when the engineer would blow the horn for us, am I right? Cheers 'n chuckles ~ john
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Date: 1/28/2017 11:07:00 AM
That would be correct:) Thanks for the drive by, John:)
Date: 1/24/2017 6:29:00 PM
Very thoughtful and endearing poem, Daniel. Fond childhood memories tend to hold the most emotional value as the years pass. This was a beautiful rendering of your childhood recollections. Emotionally touching poetry. Ty for sharing. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 1/25/2017 9:53:00 AM
Thank you, Freddie. The longer I live, the more value they have. Now, I can even look back at the not so good times and still take pleasure.
Date: 1/24/2017 4:50:00 PM
I love this Daniel. It brings back fond memories of my own childhood growing up in the backwaters of Fla. Great rhyme, rhythm and balance. Wonderful imagery. A big 7 from me. God Bless and thanks for the memories. JB
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Date: 1/25/2017 9:50:00 AM
Florida huh? Been there many many times. When I was really young, I got a dollar each week for an allowance if I did all of my chores. In those days a dollar bought a lot. They are special memories, a little sad. Thank you for friendly visits Judy:)
Date: 1/24/2017 1:59:00 PM
Hi Daniel, I really enjoyed this write. You took reader back in time, to simpler time with this nostalgic write. Thanks for sharing this gem:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 1/24/2017 2:57:00 PM
I may be too young. But I've heard the amazing stories:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/24/2017 2:42:00 PM
I know you are probably too young to know of such happenings but they were indeed simple pleasures in simple days. Thank you so much for your support and friendship, Alexis:)
Date: 1/24/2017 8:50:00 AM
Some of my fondest memories where in my Granddaddy's old country store! Exactly the same! You didn't live in Enon N.C. did you? Love this! Thanks for this one!
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Date: 1/24/2017 8:54:00 AM
No, but I have been through there:) Old country stores were the backbone of rural life. I think everyone has a story about their own old country store. My grandfather owned a grocery store too. Just not the one in this poem. Thanks Mike:)
Date: 1/23/2017 8:32:00 PM
One of your best DT, it had to be one of the greatest of times to be a kid, the mid-fifties to early sixties. I wish I could re-live it all again...
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:54:00 PM
We just did:) Thank you, Charlie
Date: 1/23/2017 2:13:00 PM
Memories like this are treasures especially for grandchildren and their offspring who live in a different world than the one you grew up in. Because you describe in such detail they will understand what it felt like to live in those times. Keep writing these treasures for them Daniel, for all of us. ; ) 7
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, Mrs Connie. I miss those days:)
Date: 1/23/2017 1:00:00 PM
A sweet mermory telling Danny :)
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Kina. I wish you had been there. We would have really had some laughs.
Date: 1/23/2017 9:15:00 AM
What a great nostalgic poem Daniel; those certainly were the good old days!:)
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:58:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Cheryl. Yes they were:)
Date: 1/23/2017 8:02:00 AM
Really a great poem that makes one nostalgic:) you brought those good ol' days back to life, a 7:)
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:01:00 PM
Thank you, Jo. You're too young to remember, silly:)
Date: 1/23/2017 7:26:00 AM
What a wonderful poetic journey back to the days when life moved just a little bit slower. Nicely done Daniel.
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:02:00 PM
Probably a little before your time, Chris. There was good and bad, we just didn't know about it:) Kinda like the song "Curtis Lowe"
Date: 1/22/2017 4:22:00 PM
lovely memories Daniel:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:09:00 PM
Yes Mrs Jan. Some of them, anyway. If only you had been there:) I'll bet you would have had a lot of fun, just as we did. Simple pleasures:)
Date: 1/22/2017 3:28:00 PM
Great poem, of simpler times, and childhood memories, well done, definitely a 7.
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Date: 1/24/2017 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, John. I'll bet you made a few trips to an old country store at some point, Huh?
Date: 1/22/2017 3:08:00 PM
Very Nice Daniel ! :)
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Date: 1/24/2017 3:20:00 PM
Have you always lived in New England, Heidi? Didn't you once say you lived in NH, or was it VT? Surely ya'll had some old country stores. Perhaps you're just too young:) Thank you for the friendly visit, Heidi.

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