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Ya Tebya Lyublyu

My first Russian piece. I'm not actually very confident with Russian so more than anything it's an excuse to use it and preferrably advance. The grammar is probably dreadful and quite simply sickening. Govorite s mnoj Shelot razbeyat' strakh Veter i krushenie dozhdya Kholodnoe tverdoe telo Porvannyj kak fragmenty ser'eznosti I ischez __ Speak to me Whisper and remove fear Wind and the wreck of rain The cold body rigid Like seriousness torn as fragments And has faded.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/27/2009 4:57:00 PM
now do it in a russian jewish dialect and you have your contest entry for Dialects Make the World Go Round! Light & Love
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Date: 8/24/2009 10:42:00 AM
I love how simple this poem is... and how as it fades out it leaves this overwhelming sense of longing. It´s beautiful, Lady. Love ya! Daffy
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Date: 8/22/2009 12:47:00 PM
Nicely done. Since I don't read, write, and speak Russian without looking up words to copy, it is totally on the English part. Sara
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