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Wronged--Seven Deadly Sins

Thank you for coming on short notice, sir. A drink, perhaps, before we speak of her? No? To bus’ness then. Ending civil strife Requires me to move against my wife. I trust that you will note I’m not to blame When you have heard how I’ve been put to shame. She scolds me when I’ve had too much to eat, Objects when I explain my right to cheat, Upbraids me when I sleep ‘til after noon, Laughs at my goal to own the sun and moon, Reproves me when I covet what is theirs, Knocks my hauteur and all my “put-on airs.” My fury at this treatment you must see; I need your legal skills to set me free. 1/31/2016

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Date: 2/24/2016 3:16:00 PM
Great humour here Steve - guess it's too late for counselling here - no wonder so many relationship fail!:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations Steve! You truly are deserving! :)-HANS
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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/8/2016 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, Hans. Appreciate your stopping by.
Date: 2/8/2016 7:44:00 AM
Hi Steve. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/8/2016 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Teddy. It was a pleasant surprise.
Date: 2/7/2016 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this clever poem!
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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/8/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. It was inspired by Robert Browning, whom some consider the master of the dramatic monologue form.
Date: 2/7/2016 10:56:00 AM
Hi Steve, Congrats on your awesome win. Love lINDA
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Date: 2/7/2016 9:22:00 AM
thank you for the reply
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Date: 2/7/2016 8:50:00 AM
The sinner in complete denial of all sin. Great take on the theme Steve, appreciate your participating in the contest.
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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/7/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks, John. It was an intriguing contest.
Date: 2/3/2016 6:36:00 PM
enjoyed your entry Steve:), good luck in the contest.. @-> LINDA <-@
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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/7/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. Did OK as it turns out.
Date: 2/1/2016 3:27:00 AM
Intriguing way to present the theme but it's there well written within the lines~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/1/2016 4:18:00 AM
Thank you, Olive. Joined just weeks ago and continue discovering the many talented people who post here. After a brief look at your recent efforts, I can see you are one of those. More later.

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