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Wrong Road Taken

On a darkened road, in the dead of night, A wrong road taken, now a sorry plight. No more gas, and so turned around. Forest and fog on a moonless night abound. Frightening sounds from within the woods God protect me, I beg, as I close the hood. There’s a light off yonder, twinkling thru the trees. But I truly fear what there, waits for me. I see a man with a gun stalking thru the trees. With a bobbing lantern, he has seen me. Good or evil… this is quite a test. I jump inside. Locking the doors fearing death. I see he’s old and withered as his eyes meet mine. And he laughs eerily as he sets the gun against a tree to recline. Can’t be too careful in these old hills, he explains, as he gives his name. Taking a wrong turn out here can be a dangerous game. Strangers are rarely welcomed, as some are up to no good. Now, lets see you’re gas level, then what’s happening under the hood. Sure enough I’d run out of gas, so he gave me a few gallons to last. With written instructions to the closest station for gas… He said he’d call the owner so someone would be there waiting. A harrowing night ended rather well…with a thank you and a blessing. It could have been worse… I could have been dead. Now I’m just grateful… It was he who was there, as my light up ahead. CSEastman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/14/2012 7:22:00 PM
A riveting piece, Carol! Full of wonderful phrasing and imagery. It had me enthralled until the very end. Well done!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/4/2012 5:18:00 PM
What a story! I love it!
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Date: 5/4/2012 11:33:00 AM
great rhyming.
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Stranded/Ghosts" contest Carol. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2012 12:52:00 PM
A cut and paste apology for a cogratulations message but congrats. Am on holiday with limited access xx
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:46:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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