Wrong Hands

Gun in nightstand Drawer slowly opened Homeowners demise

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2013 8:34:00 PM

yes, that is how it goes. what do you think of everyone crying over obama wanting to take assault weapons from our hands? maybe there is something I am not seeing?? Lots of countries have harsher laws than here in the US, don't they?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/22/2013 11:21:00 PM

Yes we certainly do in Canada and I don't feel it infringes on my freedom. Why people need assault weapons is beyond me.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/19/2013 9:33:00 AM

Something to think about. What will happen I don't know, but something gots" to give. Is this for the contest? Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/22/2013 11:22:00 PM

It was but I found out it wasn't a haiku so I wrote another one.