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Wrong Destination

Unaided and jaded within a world I have created, isolated and left alone I see my light travelling has faded. I walked and ran to sit then stand and in my mind’s eye, I figured my plan should be grand and decided to fly. Lonesome in my shadow I free myself for my dignity, although I live down below I see my darkened solitary. Philosophical and redeeming I sense a tempting wonder, catastrophic, dull and streaming I condense my infinite ponder. A light travel in the distance can string along imagination, while my sight loses resistance, and brings a wrong destination. Couplet with internal rhyme Travel Light Contest Kai Michael Neumann January 15, 2017

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Date: 2/3/2017 1:37:00 PM
Congrats Laura! :-)
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Date: 2/3/2017 5:10:00 AM
Luloo, this is great. You writing poetry is the right destination. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/2/2017 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations luloo!! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 2/2/2017 6:48:00 AM
I loce it how you used light and dark here in so many clever ways. Congratulations
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Date: 1/16/2017 7:56:00 AM
Deep and beautiful ...
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