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Below is the poem entitled Wrong which was written by poet Elliot Randall. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I sit upon, my thoughts so blunt:
I hear the birds that cry,
Not what I do, but what I can't, 
One can only try. 

I look upon, the sky so dark, 
The air is cool and still. 
The journeys that I won't embark,
Feelings I'll never feel. 

I'll walk this road, with uncertainty: 
I'll help myself along, 
Until I rest-- eternally,
Forgetting all my wrong.

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Elliot, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Wishing you the best this new coming week. Take care :-) Linda

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Nice write. Very deep and very passionate. Great Work.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 4:24:00 AM
    What you did here is what every poet strives to do-a universal feeling /experience in a few words. Good write. Cheers. Rick

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 1:46:00 AM
    LOVED this poem Elliot....I relate completely unfortunately but then I think that's why I loved it so much...I could feel every word.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:41:00 PM
    I like this...wrong not to try to live a little or a lot!