Get Your Premium Membership

Written When Most Are Proud Cyborgs

In pleasantries, orchestrated on our screens, We live the lives of many men and women, As if sex could be! We grow, composed of well-cooked pablum Eaten between long work hours, digested pleasantly. In a fetal coil, I rest, my optic eye Doesn’t blink at the silver reticules of my mind: My body well knit by well-knit engineers, This me-model makes real tears, running from my eyes. Of course I’m human – hammered out in school, Wearing what Designers Club tells me to; You and I, we can adjust ourselves with tools, Look down upon the Primitives -- those old fools. Insulated from all microbial bio-terrors, Safe from the brute, the thorn, the flawed flower Blooming wild; we -- kept safe – know no variant weather, Pity the Primitive, exposed to flood and laser-tower. Did you see those messages, scrawled upon a wall, Comparing us with vipers at Adam’s Fall? There’s not an original thought in what he thinks: That purist Primitive! His raw flesh stinks! Computers say it best, and yet, I see Something –compelling--- in his graffiti: “O song, sing forth unto the endless skies-- O hear, created stars! You long have looked Upon all who weep, who ever made outcry, And wrote it down, in God’s forgotten book.” written for those in the future--a protest against genetic engineering

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/29/2009 12:09:00 PM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Judyth. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2009 11:48:00 AM
A finely tuned metaphorical matrix to say the least. So many things here to enjoy, not to mention the overall message. Loved the inclusion of "well-cooked pablum", so many layers and meanings hang on this one literary hook. And the spiraling tighter around the "primitives", a very strong point and clinching the treatise with "God's forgotten book." So well crafted, thank you for sharing. Definite addition to my favorites.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs