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Drug misuse and addiction is so rampant nowadays. Shame that even those who knows the effects of these drugs partake illegally.. This poem is made to bring forth awareness and again a reminder that we, one way or another must do our own part to stop this.. 

little things that is done with good intentions I believe shall progress in bigger things.. :)! 

WRITTEN IN DRUGS OF RAIN Unscrupulous vulture-like officials standing inside skyscrapers; they croon softly, but wield their pretentious tongues like blades-- casting spells on a throng of marginalized heads whose mouths and bellies were squeezed and dried. The promises they speak were written in a drugged rain blown by the wind and dispersed in grains of misconception. Beguiled man bit the taste and was addicted without haste. (candle of hope was trampled --toppled down to fade..) Secretly, these greedy, flesh -eating crocodiles of today collude under wooden tables. Their lust for gold and silver screaming, they fill their jars of wickedness; voraciously they feed their minds-- harlots of desire. The big bellied ones whistle trying to clamp leeches who don't only suck blood but also innocence; but when the cluster of eggs break-- hatches as they run so fast and release a loud.... prrrrt! The misuse of drugs and ignorance cause bodies to be spread in dirty smelly gutters. The users mutilated dignity comes from a constant craving for shots and puffs from these drugs leading to gruesome miscarriage of suppose to be~~ --golden flowering dreams for tomorrow, --transformers to a more unified earth, --angels bearing an eye for justice and peace. Manifold arrests for drugs affect the youth and all others who grasp the illusions of euphoria. Concerned individuals' throat drying cries, a forlorn scourge of agony... Oh God, what sight that will be! And now, Shall we, knowledgeable of the effects of drug addiction, let such things happen? Won't we drubbed such escalated catena of grief by doing something? What can we impart? What can we do to care? When will we start? ©O. E. Guillermo 8:44 pm; November 13, 2014 Sponsor Debbie Guzzi Contest Name Global Poetry placed 3rd

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Date: 12/6/2014 9:58:00 PM
Hi Olive, coming back to congratulate you on a great win with a controversial subject! Your poem is brilliant and powerfully expressed...love it! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:33:00 AM
thanks much Rhonda.. :)! this is so late reply.. :)! indeed.. :) i thought of something to express mine.
Date: 12/4/2014 10:35:00 AM
Good work that is in the winners' line-up..Way to go ..Congratulations on your big win..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2014 7:22:00 AM
thank you SAra.. :)! I appreciate it.. :)!
Date: 12/2/2014 3:31:00 PM
Brilliantly penned Olive. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:07:00 AM
thanks Brenda.. God bless you always..
Date: 12/2/2014 1:06:00 PM
Back with very merited congratulations, Olive_eloi!:) From the start this had winner written all over it! May I tempt you with a tasty Sicilian Cassatella!! hugs // paul
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:08:00 AM
i never tried that Paul.. :) it will be nice to share one with you.. :)
Date: 12/2/2014 12:43:00 AM
Congrats on your winning awesome write dear Olive!
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:08:00 AM
thanks Dr. Upma.
Date: 12/1/2014 7:37:00 PM
Thanks Olive for all your hard work! It really paid off! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:06:00 AM
thank you for the place Debbie.. i didn't expect this to be among the top.. :O
Date: 12/1/2014 4:49:00 PM
very powerful message - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/2/2014 5:56:00 AM
thanks much Jan.. :) hugs too.. :D
Date: 11/24/2014 3:32:00 PM
Great job,enjoyed that,not all if i'm honest,but most i enjoyed.
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:57:00 PM
I want to employ awareness here.. :) just that.. thanks much for appreciating it.. :)
Date: 11/24/2014 11:52:00 AM
Hi Olive, Your whole name is wonderfully poetically flowing and beautiful. Your parents did a nice job. Your poem is deliciously wicked and profound. It was like a car crash that hit me in the face. (I don't know if that is a good thing.) I enjoyed it any way. A sign of a good poet is the ability to impact and move your audience. I, for one, am moved, and impacted. Keep up the good work. Earl
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Date: 11/24/2014 3:21:00 PM
thanks much.. :) hahahaha being hit on the face woooow! not good.. :D! thanks much for dropping by, this poem meant to do that.. :)
Date: 11/19/2014 1:25:00 PM
This is powerfully expressed and addictive! Drug abuse and its effects are well treated, and I hope that the messages that you are intent on passing will not fall on deaf ears. Well done Olive_eloi! // paul
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Date: 11/19/2014 7:55:00 PM
Thanks much PAul.. :)! i always enjoy love reading your comments.. !
Date: 11/14/2014 7:24:00 AM
what a forceful, entangled work which speaks to me as city life becomes more rabid, eloi... ang galling!.. remarkable.. soupie you soon!.. hugggs
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Date: 11/15/2014 3:16:00 AM
thank you Nette.. :) I appreciate your every drop by.. :)@ see you soon miss you much and hugs.. :)!
Date: 11/13/2014 1:55:00 PM
Powerful message in your poetry Olive. You've captured the Street Life, underbelly of drugs, the dealing and the taking. Way to go girl - James :)
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Date: 11/15/2014 3:15:00 AM
Thanks much James.. :) this was a product of my current reads, some documentary and news I watched that's main subject is about drug addiction.. God bless us all.. :)
Date: 11/13/2014 9:13:00 AM
The bold and italic was yelling at me but I think it works . . . drugs and addition does this -- to the one on drugs you look normal but from the outside world, your actions are screaming out. I am on the board for Recovery Resource Council as non-profit working to help people get healthy. Loved the poem my friend. Keep writing.
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Date: 11/15/2014 3:09:00 AM
thanks much David.. :) I was just inspired and lately, its my earnest desire to write some poems that may create awareness that whoever shall take the time to read they will be somehow reminded.... God bless us all.. :)!
Date: 11/13/2014 8:48:00 AM
Please do not bold & Italic everything Olive the device is meant to be used for emphasis. Sending mail soon Light & Love a fan
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Date: 11/15/2014 3:06:00 AM
thanks much Debbie.. :) I can not say more but let me thank you.. Your contests do inspire me as they deal with reality and that problems that affects generations of today..

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