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Wrinkles On My Wrinkles

Soon will turn eighty, that's over the hill But the Highland Fling, I'm able to do still As my kilt flips up One can see I'm no pup With wrinkles on my wrinkles I'm heading downhill © Jack Ellison 2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/20/2015 8:58:00 AM

Wow! This is without a doubt a 7. I am so voracious for more of your lines right now and I definitely will come by to enjoy the bliss of your words.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 9:00:00 AM

In the dictionary beside the word "kind" is a picture of you my good friend!!! WOW!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/19/2015 4:11:00 PM

Definitely did not expect the kilt flip, Jack. Then again, I should expect the unexpected from you! Awesome limerick!!! :) Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/19/2015 4:23:00 PM

Phew!!!!!

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/19/2015 4:22:00 PM

No worries Jack! I find you pieces hilarious! ~Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/19/2015 4:21:00 PM

I apologize for my naughtiness, sweet lady! Don't want to do anything that would in any way, discourage you from visiting! From now on I will keep that in mine my dear one!!! Lots of love, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/19/2015 2:58:00 PM

Hope the winds are warm or there'll be shrivels along with those wrinkles

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/19/2015 4:10:00 PM

XD!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/19/2015 3:15:00 PM

Can't imagine what you could possibly mean, Mr. Tim?????

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/19/2015 1:18:00 PM

Now LimmerJack you're not heading down hill... And old age hasn't made you mentally ill... You live up North so there's a natural chill... But the wrinkles didn't come from being old and shrill... The lines are from all that laughter you instill... My friend they're laughter lines from so much good will....

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/19/2015 3:14:00 PM

Ya! That's it... they're laugh lines!!! LOL See, when I laugh, how the wrinkles get more obvious! Told ya! xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2015 8:28:00 AM

ha ha ha - hilarious my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2015 9:02:00 AM

There is a humour contest Jack you should enter it!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/19/2015 8:36:00 AM

Silliness reigns!!! LOL Huggsies, Jack xxx