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Silent journey I ride with you O Mother Earth On the wings of time and space I feel you cradle me in your arms Lifting me high above you To feel the kiss of your wind ..... and the warmth of your sun A flicker of light and I am Surfing the tips of your waves Salty mist fills my nose My eyelashes sticky with moisture My heart wide open Oh joy ! To glide up and down On your surging tide To undulate with the motion Of your sea To feel the movement of the Magical water beings below me Sunlight follows me Illuminating the foam before me Twinkling glitter radiating Centuries of adventure and passion Lust and loss spread out before me Ancient battles Sunken ships Lost treasures and dreams lay Below me in the darkened depths Remembering your light within my heart A child of eight Knowing you Mother Earth Digging in your soil Smelling the damp dirt Grasping handfuls Unearthing small treasures of Colored glass and painted pottery Glancing upwards towards the sky Filled with puffy white cloud dreams Knowing your spirit and soul Feeling you entwined with me In the heavens and stars Finding you in unexpected ways Climbing the highest trees Grasping at thick branches Hoisting myself up Beams of light piercing through Shadows beckoning me higher My t-shirt soaked with excited sweat and purpose Flying my dime-store kite Out of my bedroom window Wind taking it up so far Up.... up...up Appearing as a migratory bird Making its way home Dissolving into a small speck Until I could see it no more Painful grooves biting into my fingers Cutting her loose She’s free to fly home now Transcending time A silent whisper Imperceptible movement Pushing upward Through fertile earth I slowly unfurl my cloak of greenery Stretching out my arms Raising my head upward I see the beauty of my form A new seedling with furry lime tendrils A baby plant on the carpet of the forest Glancing upward I see my self surrounded Sacred towering redwood giants gaze down upon me As sunlight music tickles my soul Susan Lawrence Copyright 2021

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Date: 11/3/2023 2:49:00 AM
Hi dear Susan! Seeing there were no new posts I lingered awhile, rereading some of your past poems, including this one, while reviving memories. ~ Warm regards & hugs my friend. // paul
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Date: 10/21/2022 4:16:00 AM
This ride with mother Nature floating up and down enjoying the sky and its wide panorma and swimming with the waves of ocean seeing and sensing the mysterious secrets and the aqua beings it encloses is an experience so exciting and wonderful. A splendid piece of writing, dear Susan! Much enjoyed....
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Date: 10/30/2022 7:03:00 AM
Dear Valsa , in gratitude for your visit and wonderful comments . Taking them in and enjoying sharing this journey with you ! Looking forward to more of your beautiful writing soon . Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
Date: 7/5/2022 1:56:00 AM
Such a wonderful tapestry Susan. I've read many of your poems and the title to this brilliant piece could well describe your style. The artist in you can be 'seen' in your writing. There is a visual-spatial feel to your work. Love it all. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 7/5/2022 4:08:00 PM
Hi dear Gary . Thank you so much for your visit and wonderful comments. I am thrilled you could journey with me through moments in time . I appreciate your participation! All the best ! Susan :)
Date: 6/18/2022 4:09:00 PM
gosh I keep looking around and cant find a poem I have not read of yours. let me know if one exists. In the meantime, I sure hope to see a new one from you soon.
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Date: 6/18/2022 5:42:00 PM
Thank you dear Andrea . Big hugs. Love, Susan :)
Date: 5/25/2022 9:18:00 AM
After searching awhile I managed to find this excellent poem which had escaped my attention. Straight away I could feel the bond between you and Mother Earth, and the imagery that follows confirms that. Like you I love the sea; I am lucky to live 10 mins away by car from the beach, and I take full advantage of the fact :) Regards and hugs my friend. // paul
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Date: 5/27/2022 10:23:00 PM
Dear Paul, Lucky you are to live so close to the sea… a gift that continues to give and give with each visit . A tapestry before your eyes to behold ! Always in gratitude for your visit, comments and participation. Hugs to you my friend. Susan :)
Date: 4/26/2022 9:25:00 PM
As a weaver by trade, the word woven in your title draws me here. I can relate so much to your moments of interweaving astounding words and stanzas, those that give so much joy to your readers.
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Date: 5/2/2022 8:26:00 AM
Thank you dear Harry . It’s always a joy to have you visit my poems ! Sending big hugs to you and wishing you a wonderful week . Your presence is so appreciated. Susan :)
Date: 4/22/2022 11:10:00 PM
Part 2) The smell of salt water, the touch of sand and foam, the sight of the sky and warmth of the sun as you float on your back. Your poem is an autobiography of a young person's discovery of so many pleasures this earth affords: sea, sky, flight, freedom, trees, soil, wind, sun. Connected with all of it. Your ending is simply perfect as a natal seedling reaching up to embrace your new world, with the seasoned trees and sunlight welcoming you. I marvel at your emotional IQ and your manner of viewing life through a spiritual lens of wonder, gratitude, growth, renewal, and reverence. I applaud your POTW recognition for this jewel, and I would give it five faves if I could. To be marveled at and relived again and again. Simply wonderful. Hugs and blessings ~ John
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Date: 4/26/2022 4:24:00 PM
My journeys through nature are my first memories. Nothing touches me deeper . In gratitude to my parents for all of the many hikes , camping trips and adventures we embarked on as I grew from a small child . Being kissed by nature and her infinite gifts is unlike anything else . Blessings to you and yours. Grateful for your presence . Hugs and all best wishes, Susan :)
Date: 4/22/2022 10:47:00 PM
Susan, I was looking for a poem of yours that I hadn't commented on, and it turned out this one felt like the perfect one to wish you a Happy Earth Day! Your eighth year must have been very significant to you, as I have read two of your accounts from that year of your life. I am struck by the warmth and nurturing of your first stanza. There's a reason we call her "Mother", many actually. Like you, I adore swimming in the ocean, a love affair begun in my youth and continued to this day. It is like flying, only better - to feel weightless but still connected to the earth. To acknowledge that you are not alone but are welcomed by the sea life into their home.
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Date: 4/26/2022 4:20:00 PM
Dearest John, Thank you for your acknowledgement and your kind words . The connection we both feel and many others is sacred to our dear Mother Earth . I agree with you .. that feeling of weightlessness, yet still feeling connected . I love the waves and being in the water and being enraptured by what lies beneath . The mystery and immensity of our ocean and it’s creatures . They who have been here for millenniums. Oh the stories they could tell .
Date: 3/28/2022 7:14:00 AM
I enjoyed this wonderful write honoring our great Planet, best wishes
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Date: 3/29/2022 8:00:00 AM
Dear Joseph, Thank you for your visit. Our dear Planet deserves all of the love and honoring we can give it. all the best, Susan :)
Date: 1/24/2022 4:48:00 AM
I have to bow to the whole of this jewel my friend. Every stanza a beautiful creation contributing to a magnificent whole. A very fine favorite. God bless..
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Date: 1/24/2022 1:01:00 PM
Robert, You are such a gift here. Thank you for your presence. I am honored by your comments, and fav. Happy you could join me on this journey. Blessings and all good wishes always, Susan :)
Date: 1/5/2022 10:59:00 AM
Susan I enjoyed this voyage when I saw this poem among the Weeks Features. Congrats ... Light is a theme for some poems I wrote this week. Thanx, happy 2022
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Date: 1/7/2022 7:13:00 AM
Hi Anil, Thank you for your visit and comments. Happy to find you and your work. Happy New Year to you and yours. Susan :)
Date: 1/4/2022 1:40:00 AM
Mature.
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Date: 1/7/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thank you for your visit !
Date: 3/17/2021 2:31:00 PM
Sounds like a beautiful relationship. ;0)
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Date: 1/7/2022 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Richard ! It is. hugs, Susan :)
Date: 2/28/2021 7:25:00 PM
I really loved your EIGHT poem and faved it but for some reason the capcha on it would not validate for me.
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Date: 3/2/2021 5:07:00 PM
Thank you dear Andrea. Big hugs to you. All the best and looking forward to more of your poems! Susan :)
Date: 2/25/2021 7:31:00 AM
I love this so.. it's a taste of hope, a breath of joy and a whisper of faith... brilliant writing. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 3/2/2021 5:06:00 PM
Gina, I hug you. Thank you my dear soul. You are such a gift. I appreciate your beautiful poems and spirit so very much. Blessings to you always, Susan :)
Date: 2/23/2021 4:44:00 AM
You have captured the essence of nature beautifully. Big congrats on your POTW. Hugs
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Date: 2/23/2021 1:25:00 PM
Dear Cecilia , Thank you so much ! I look forward to reading your poetry ! All best wishes , Susan :)
Date: 2/20/2021 7:16:00 AM
As I catch up in PS, I see that this beautiful poem was POTW. A Belated congrats, Susan, I look forward to reading more of your work. Hugs, John
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Date: 2/22/2021 7:06:00 AM
Thank you dear John ! I have really been enjoying reading your poems. All best wishes, Susan :)
Date: 2/16/2021 1:31:00 PM
I feel your joy in all these beautiful moments. I see it was a POTW. Belated congrats
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Date: 2/17/2021 7:32:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Andrea. Sending all good wishes to you ! hugs, Susan:)
Date: 2/14/2021 10:13:00 AM
I just have to read this again. It is one of the best!
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Date: 2/15/2021 8:51:00 PM
Hugs to you Akkina !!
Date: 2/9/2021 2:44:00 PM
exquisite poetry so sorry i missed reading this gem before, many congrats on a belated POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/10/2021 2:22:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Jan . Big hugs to you xx all the best always. Susan :)
Date: 2/7/2021 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on POTW. Exceptional writing. ;0)
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Date: 2/7/2021 2:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard. I appreciate your kind words. All the best , Susan:)
Date: 2/5/2021 5:26:00 PM
With this awesome write, recognition of poem of the week was well deserved! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/5/2021 5:26:00 PM
With this awesome write, recognition of poem of the week was well deserved! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/7/2021 11:50:00 AM
Robert, Thank you so much for your kind words! I am glad my poem moved you. Looking forward to reading you poetry. All the best, Susan :)
Date: 2/5/2021 6:10:00 AM
Oh dear beautiful friend, how come I missed this? What a LOVELY poem.. my soul too traversed along with the delicate wings of magical words of this poetic gem through all wonders of creations of Mother Earth. A BIG congrats on POTW. Hoping to read more of your poems Susan. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 2/7/2021 11:48:00 AM
Dearest Ani, I am so happy to know you. Thank you for joining me on my travels through time and space and in the arms of Mother Earth ! Sending all good thoughts to you. All the best, Susan :)
Date: 2/5/2021 4:10:00 AM
Wow! What a wonderful journey beautifully penned. I read it again and again enjoying every moment. So many wonderful lines. Congratulations on your well deserved Potw. Enjoy the honour. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/7/2021 11:46:00 AM
Rama, Thank you so much for your kind words! I am so happy my poem moved you. All best wishes for a wonderful week. I look forward to reading your poetry. Susan :)
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