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Woven

T hin strands of DNA entwine to form the core of me. A work in progress blooming on the loom of life. P ain and plenty leave colored cords rough or soft. E ndless moments of love and confusion shuttle S eamlessly within the makers metaphoric hands T umbling in a tumult of multi-colored tufts R aised and sheltering is the garment of my life Y outh an oft sought memory rushed to the calm of age.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/15/2012 11:32:00 PM
Debbie, another warm congratulations nice work in Carol's "TAPESTRY" contest.. always~ PD
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Date: 8/14/2012 5:41:00 PM
One I missed....and of course, it should place higher yet........it weaves even more upon the 2nd reading! Beautiful tapestry of words!
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Date: 8/11/2012 11:42:00 PM
Wonderful, Debs. Big congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/11/2012 10:42:00 AM
An excellent write, Debbie! I love the 2nd line. Congrats on a well-deserved win! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/11/2012 6:18:00 AM
A wonderful Acrostic here Debi!Congrats on your win!Oh yes,my first passion was painting and sketching..I can sketch a face by seeing the photo..poetry became my passion later...kash
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Date: 8/11/2012 4:29:00 AM
Debbie, congrats on your win, I like this a lot, I like the way you added aliteration as well, and thanks for your kind comments on my poem...David
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Date: 8/10/2012 1:12:00 PM
Very great work penned..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2012 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserved win.
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Date: 8/10/2012 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/10/2012 8:40:00 AM
congrats on your win
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Date: 8/10/2012 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win in my Tapestry contest Debbie. Thank you for supporting this contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2012 7:35:00 PM
Wonderful writing Debbie. I want to go and take mine back. Love, Joyce
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