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Wounds Unhealed

She loved him more than she loved herself... But he loved the booze more than he loved her.... Their crazy life together was like a SAD SONG... "These wounds won't seem to heal"... "This pain is just too real"... "There's just too much that time cannot erase"...

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Date: 4/8/2014 4:07:00 PM
The last three lines are the same as an Evanescence song... Not an accusation just a text to text connection.
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Char Vanderbilt
Date: 4/8/2014 9:58:00 PM
Yes..it is the Evanescence song...it's the SAD SONG I was referring to...
Date: 4/8/2014 1:18:00 PM
Sometimes the hardest lessons are the ones that build the most character.
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Date: 4/8/2014 7:49:00 AM
Char, these are hard facts of some relatiionships.
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