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You belong somewhere in the vast cosmos where the idiomatic idioms were born I started to wonder and cry, Lord, have mercy; this is not I. I felt as if years had passed! along with age! farewell oh, we soar to an infinite place to dwell. The last goodbye was the hardest, we never got to say our final adieu remember how we danced near stardust? They say that tears are a sign of weakness, so I held back my tears to ease the pain, I buried it in the hollows of my heart. Yet, they poured into my empty soul tearing me apart with deep cuts even the most idyllic love must die was it not because of love's cries? will leave a scar to stultify it... I shall bleed and grieve till the wounds heal making room for unworn pain, to experience sorrow again.
Written: February 05, 2023 1st place contest winner I Felt Like Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 3/8/2023 1:03:00 PM
This was quite beautiful. Loved the last part.
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Date: 2/22/2023 5:32:00 AM
- Yes, it leaves deep scars, Las - A sensitive poem, beautifully written - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
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Date: 2/21/2023 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away..........................
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Date: 2/20/2023 8:31:00 PM
"They say that tears are a sign of weakness, so I held back my tears to ease the pain, I buried it in the hollows of my heart. " It so happens especially to men. A very poignant poem tugging at the heart chords. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 2/20/2023 8:20:00 PM
"idiomatic idioms", "even the most idyllic love must die" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/20/2023 5:29:00 PM
Lasaad, you have expressed your pain and sadness so beautiful. (If that makes sense) Undoubtably- the last good-byes are the hardest. Love this! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Charlie
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Date: 2/6/2023 2:19:00 AM
So sad to lose a loved one once had. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/5/2023 10:32:00 PM
Deep and painful, Sotto:)
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Date: 2/5/2023 5:21:00 PM
Lasaad, you have amplified your wound resoundingly, and the efforts you dealt, were equally remarkable, all my best, Aloha William
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Date: 2/5/2023 4:38:00 PM
Wow this is heartfelt and love lost to mourn. A favorite for me. For this depressed state I was in many years ago and when I read this it was like it was written for me and my pain. Excellent words that touch deep and sad memories and thoughts are brought back through these touching words my friend. Thank you for posting...
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Date: 2/5/2023 1:59:00 PM
we never got to say our final adieu remember how we danced near stardust? so I held back my tears to ease the pain, I buried it in the hollows of my heart. Yet, they poured into my empty soul tearing me apart with deep cuts//Heartfelt, Lasaad!
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Date: 2/5/2023 11:48:00 AM
Great inspiring poem for all, love this my friend : )
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