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Wound Tight

So many questions, Not enough time; To sort out the mayhem, That i call my tormented mind. I know im analytical, And thoughts run too deep; But a brain in maximum overdrive, Means a lifetime without sleep. Ive tried different avenues, To put the madness to rest; But the fix is only temporary, Numbing me for a day more or less. I never once asked, To be born this way; To live life on a ledge, Every single day. Some people say, To embrace it as a gift; That would be like cherishing an ache that wont ever lift. They did testing on me, Said i had a very high IQ; But it just adds more to the curse, Of what i go through. I cry out to my creator, About this misery in me; To strip from me these demons, Who wont let me be. I could leap off this ledge, But it just doesnt seem right ; So i continue to walk this high wire, Where my sanity's wound tight...

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Date: 12/3/2012 7:52:00 PM
Congratulations ~ what a great write! :)
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Date: 12/3/2012 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Carl. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:56:00 PM
I know the feeling of not being able to sleep because the mind is racing. But not for my intelligence. haha. THis is very interesting one. Congrats on your top spot!!!
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Carl Fraser
Date: 11/30/2012 4:00:00 PM
Yup no fun some nights, i should say most nights,anyways thanks for commenting, blessings, Carl
Date: 11/27/2012 2:26:00 PM
Wow...are u sure u didn't write this one about me??? I can never seem to escape my over active mind! Congrats on the big win!!!!
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Carl Fraser
Date: 11/30/2012 3:49:00 PM
Ya guess i should of called it Gwendolens, wound tight, ha, ha . Thanks for commenting, blessings Carl
Date: 11/27/2012 8:38:00 AM
This is really a great poem of yours which I've enjoyed reading, Carl! Many congratulations on your super win! love/hugs, Leonora
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Carl Fraser
Date: 11/30/2012 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Leonora, i appreciate the comments, have a great day, blessings Carl
Date: 11/27/2012 7:34:00 AM
Contragulations on your win! I experience racing thoughts all the time. It's a horrible feeling when you cannot turn them off...Hugs, Holly Moore
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Carl Fraser
Date: 11/30/2012 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Holly, hard to turn it off sometimes, sleeping is futile, oh well, blessings Carl
Date: 11/27/2012 1:32:00 AM
Congratulations Carl on your winning place xx
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Carl Fraser
Date: 11/30/2012 3:44:00 PM
Thank you Mandy, i actually forgot all about posting this one, blessings Carl,i
Date: 11/26/2012 9:34:00 PM
Carl, some IQ and power... by the way.. I was shocked to see your on my winning list. Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry... Goodnight! ~PD
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Carl Fraser
Date: 11/29/2012 4:37:00 PM
Not as shocked as me, just got back from sea which is why i couldnt reply everyone, many thanks for your kindness, blessings ,Carl
Date: 11/4/2012 6:41:00 PM
wow...sounds like me, when pain strikes my muse goes in overdrive and won't let me sleep...i think many can relate here, good one!
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Date: 11/4/2012 9:55:00 AM
Nice flow and great content thanks for posting this !
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Date: 11/4/2012 6:46:00 AM
Sounds intimidating - to have a brain on overdrive, too many questions, fewer answers. Well penned Carl!
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Date: 11/4/2012 3:24:00 AM
Well written Carl, thank you for sharing it with me. Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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