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Would You Love Me If I Was Not a Poet

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August 3, 2023 12.50pm

Would you love me if I wasn’t a poet? Who haven’t touched your heart with my words at their depths? Who haven’t recited my love poems for you with all my heart And knelt with a rose promising that I’ll never depart? Would you love me if I wasn’t a poet? Who’d never penned your favorite love songs from my sonnets? Who, at times of your loneliness I’d not shown the brightest rainbow No inspiring words of hopes and prayers for your brighter tomorrow? Would you love me if I wasn’t a poet? Who never had the chance to shout in the whole world, you’re the best? Or spread that God’s most precious gift is you—my lyrical poems attest And remind if I’ll fail of loving you at my best, you can always detest? Would you love me if I wasn’t a poet? Please say your sweetest yes for my eagerness could no longer wait, Please tell me you would love me whoever I am and whoever I was, For I’m the most handsome guy in the universe, your first love and crush.

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/3/2023 8:00:00 PM

Would you love me if I wasn't a poet Contest Judged: 9/13/2023 1:47:00 AM Sponsored by: Silent One Place 2 (out of 3rd multi-w)

Silent One

Date: 9/13/2023 1:19:00 PM

Thats a very confident last line.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/22/2023 8:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Silent O. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/8/2023 1:46:00 PM

Such a lovely, sweet poem dear Len and I agree too- the answer would be yes! I love reading your poems - makes your heart sing! Very romantic. Fingers crossed for you … hugs xx

Len Gasun
Date: 9/22/2023 8:05:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments my dear poet friend Christina. May God bless you always and your writings. Hugs. So sorry for the late expression of gratitude because I was soo busy at school. Again, thank you so much. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 9/5/2023 4:16:00 PM

That's got to be a yes, Len. Nice entry for the contest, my friend. Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 9/22/2023 7:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments my dear poet friend Bill. God bless you always and your writings. So sorry for coming late to express my gratitude because I was always sooo busy at school. Again, thank you so much. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2023 2:02:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Leonora ... love the last line ... put a smile on my face :) - Best wishes in the contest :) -

Len Gasun
Date: 9/22/2023 7:20:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and best wishes my dear poet friend Anne-lise. I'm so sorry for coming late. Sooo busy at school most of the time. Thank you so much again. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/5/2023 1:04:00 AM

'Would be a pity if she said no.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/22/2023 7:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your insightful comment my dear poet friend Victor. The mushroom is back for a while my dear friend. I'll visit you so soon ok. Thank you so much and best wishes always. Hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 9/4/2023 4:47:00 PM

Ha! Love that last line Len. Unabashed conceit. I hope you have a honey who would answer yes to all your questions. You seem like a nice chap, for sure. Very nice entry

Len Gasun
Date: 9/4/2023 7:57:00 PM

Thank you so much again my dear poet friend Tom for coming to read one of my poems or this poem of mine and for your uplifting comments. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/3/2023 10:50:00 AM

What a Lovely write. I enjoyed this very much. "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a blessed/great ~ day/week.................

Len Gasun
Date: 9/4/2023 4:09:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Paula for reading and enjoying my poem and your best wishes. My best wishes to you as well in any contest and all your writing endeavors. Have a blessed /great day/week to you too. Thanks a lot for your unweavering support. Hugs, hugsGod bless you always and your writings.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/3/2023 4:29:00 AM

Very sweet and romantic write. Loved the flow of this and how you’ve expressed so effortlessly in a seamless manner. Especially the lines “ knelt with a rose promising ill never depart” what a line! Absolutely loved reading this. Goodluck for the contest

Len Gasun
Date: 9/4/2023 4:07:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and your best wishes my dear poet friend Ink. Good luck as well too in all your writing endeavors.