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Would You Change

Would you change anything in your life, Would you leave it alone, Would you make a different choice, On who you let come and go, Would you change your child hood dream, To let others be a star, for them to be seen, Would you you change a lot, Or just one thing, Could you put yourself, In places where you don't want to be, Or would you settle for a simple life, And be who you prefer to be, would you change your choices, That you have made before, Just remember, Whatever you choose, Can affect another door, I've made my choices, Most times not felt they were right, But to change it now, Would upturn my complete life, I felt I had to have, A change at everything i have done, But if I look back, I am proud of what I have become, If I changed something back then, I might not be here today, God gave me obstacles, But I have survived for the up coming day, As I fought or tried, And I continued my days, Even if I cried, Even when I've made some mistakes, Nobody made my choices, But I did have some help, But to change where I am today, I don't believe I would want it any other way, I've lost some good friends, Along with family as well, But I pray every night to god, And he does help me every day, I believed, I hoped, And I have faith, That someday god would rein upon me, I have a good husband, My kids, And best friends, I have a good family, A good life, As god allows me, Another day to live, I take a breathe, Enjoy my past, Present and future, And am happy of who i've become, Be happy you are alive, Remember what you have, And till this day, You never know what can happen, If you decide to make a change, In your past, Pray to be here, And become thankful for all that is, Let god do the rest, To help fix all your problems, So if your asked, If you would ever change a thing, No need to think of it, Because nothing would ever be the same, Continue your journey, Down the path that was given, Make the choices you feel are right, For its your decisions, That start your beginning...

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Date: 8/2/2016 1:46:00 PM
Tera,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/2/2016 3:11:00 PM
I will read your poems as well. At the moment i'm just learning where things are on this site. My first time of doing something like this. So far I do really enjoy being welcomed so greatly from you, as well as other's. Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 8/2/2016 11:17:00 AM
Nice poem ,would we change our yesterday's ,when it would effect all our today's?
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Date: 8/2/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank you very much Zoe Orrell. I appreciate it so much.
Date: 8/2/2016 11:02:00 AM
Tera,, wonderful post,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR -SKAT**
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Tera Brown
Date: 8/2/2016 11:24:00 AM
Thank you SKAT A. I appreciate your warm welcoming.

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