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Would You Believe

Would you believe words will never describe the block our minds place. To blockade the truth to control our thoughts so as to keep from delirium, from the truth Would you believe that life is created not by God not by science by the space we inhabit, the mind. To comprehend life is to overrule the mind, to comprehend existence, is to overrule the mind. To understand the mind is not possible, the mind sets what the mind understands. And so we will never understand we live within a set of rules to keep from madness, a mind created to prevent insanity. A mind kept prisoner by the rules set in place, by the mind set to stay so that we never understand and never comprehend the madness that would befall if we knew the truth. The mind made life, and outside it's existence, we will never find that the mind is all but is nothing.

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Date: 7/14/2014 10:16:00 AM
Edmund,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2014 12:30:00 PM
Hi Edmund, thank you for sharing this beautiful, inspirational write that I truly enjoyed reading! Well done!
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Date: 7/11/2014 7:00:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Edmund. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/11/2014 2:06:00 PM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 7/10/2014 7:33:00 AM
Edmund, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/10/2014 4:50:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Edmund :) - I choose your first great written free verse - well done ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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