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Would That I Could

If only for a moment, I’d like to enjoy your smile again You could have been the fourth of three wise men In cloud formations I sometimes see your face My heart grows heavy as past joys I trace Surely you’re playing baseball with the angels today Yet I long for you, Dad, as I clasp my hands to pray When I hear others bemoan the deeds their fathers did I remember all the strife that from your children you hid So often I view the video made for your ninetieth birthday The struggles of a hard life it will always convey But you gave your children far more than you ever had It’s with pride I still boast, “I had the greatest Dad” Would that I could go back in time once more To say, “I love you,” to a father I’ll always adore
*Written April 19, 2013

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Date: 10/19/2019 10:39:00 AM
Carolyn, This is a very thoughtful poem for your Dad. 'When I hear others bemoan the deeds their fathers did I remember all the strife that from your children you hid'. I feel as though I've disturbed a private conversation not meant for my eyes or ears. -Richard
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/21/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. I've always known I was blessed with a terrific father and wish everyone had such a role model.
Date: 4/23/2014 2:36:00 PM
Your poem brought a lump to my throat. Brilliant. Best wishes Linda
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Date: 4/20/2014 10:15:00 PM
This true gem is one for saving to one's favs., Carolyn! This is special! Lots of love, Audrey
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Date: 4/20/2014 2:51:00 PM
Its so nice to see your name popping up again. Nice bit of homage to your dad. How are you? BG
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Date: 4/20/2014 8:24:00 AM
awws. thanks for sharing :) Hugs. what a wonderful memorial
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Date: 4/19/2014 12:59:00 PM
Your Dad would be grinning ear to ear and boasting with pride that he has the greatest daughter. Splendid write Carolyn...hugs Tim
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/19/2014 1:12:00 PM
Dear Tim, I did my best, but surely I hold no record for being the greatest daughter. I could only offer him my love. thank you for your sweet comment.

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