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Would Love To Hallucinate If

WOULD LOVE TO HALLUCINATE IF… That rain drop splashed through the window Still, I could feel your lips shivering Close to my ears I could hear your heart beat Faster and foster Through the grimy face I could see your clean silhouette Quivering and wavering That rain drop splashed through the window I knew, I was hallucinating In the wine I had A peg of wine again Could bring back the dream! -puvi-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Brian Mcclain
Date: 3/4/2016 8:07:00 PM
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Hi Puvi, That's really nice, very dreamy and mysterious. Nice imagery and rhythm..well done! Cheers, Brian
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 3/4/2016 10:48:00 PM
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aww...so sweet of a comment it is..thank you Brian :)) Hope you are doing good and happy :)) Take care..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/29/2015 11:31:00 AM
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drunken speechless piece so beautiful
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/30/2015 9:09:00 AM
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hahahah :)) thank you for the sweet comment :) take care
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/16/2015 9:30:00 PM
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So beautiful, was the wine a Bordeau? :)
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/16/2015 11:26:00 PM
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hahaha...thank you Arthur :) this is purely fictional ;)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 10/31/2015 9:38:00 PM
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From the title I was expecting a blotter, not a peg. Reminds me of a swim I once had in Richmond. Loved this poem.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/31/2015 11:05:00 PM
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Haha..so tell me how was your swim..would love to read it..thank you for your time and a lovely comment rob..love and peace :))
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/28/2015 5:10:00 PM
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Remnants of Some Silly Experiences, enjoyed reading a 7.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/28/2015 10:17:00 PM
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thank you eve :) love, peace and happiness to you :*
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Alexis Y.
Date: 10/28/2015 3:50:00 PM
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This is a well written piece . I'm glad I stopped by:-) Alexis
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/28/2015 10:18:00 PM
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wow.. I am flattered :)) thank you Alexis :* love and peace dea :))

Book: Shattered Sighs