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Worst Enemy Ever

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For "Pick A Subject" Poetry Contest

Subject: RAGE

Written on 3/1/2015

War for the souls of mankind rages Serpent of old, against God he debates between heaven and hell, battle wages. Father of lies and accuser of the saints Insatiable desire to destroy the human race War for the souls of mankind rages. Hidden fury flashes through evil eyes Thunder and lightning in blackened skies between heaven and hell, battle wages. Hungry to devour, he crouches in wait Spiritual armor he cannot penetrate War for the souls of mankind rages. Appearing as Lucifer, he attempts to create An aura of light, in his heart is pure hate between heaven and hell, battle wages. Stand firm in Christ, do not hesitate Do not be deceived or it may be too late War for the souls of mankind rages between heaven and hell, battle wages. Written on 3/1/2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2015 2:56:00 AM

Laura, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison

Date: 3/5/2015 12:04:00 PM

I echo what Sandra said and offer you my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/5/2015 2:58:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! And congrats on your win as well! :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/5/2015 7:46:00 AM

Spiritual storm between good and evil...very powerful, Laura. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/5/2015 8:58:00 AM

Thanks, Sandra. And congrats on your win as well!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/5/2015 7:25:00 AM

good attempt at this most difficult form Laura rhyme not quite right it should be ABA, ABA, ABA, ABA, ABA and finish with BBAA congrats on placing hugs

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/5/2015 9:00:00 AM

Thank you, Shadow. I continue to learn and will keep this in mind. Thanks for placing my poem anyway, even with the mistakes!

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/3/2015 10:20:00 AM

The poem uses unusual and imaginative subject matter to make a statement and is clever in its use. The rhythm and story line are perfect. Well done. Emile. #7

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/3/2015 11:00:00 AM

Thank you, Emile, as always, for your supportive comments! :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/1/2015 9:27:00 PM

Good job and good luck in the contest -JT

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/1/2015 9:36:00 PM

Thanks, JT. I appreciate your encouraging comment!