Worst Day

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Found this interesting form on the list! Tell me how I did in the use of it! Laugh, cry, roll your eyes - unless you let on, I won't know :)

third worst in the universe spinning out of control out of control O U T O F C O N T R O L really bad…i know Earth date: 12/13/2016

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/25/2016 6:08:00 AM

Wow! Creative verse. ;) I like it a lot~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2016 7:04:00 AM

Thank you, JW! :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/13/2016 9:46:00 AM

I'm not sure how the form is supposed to look, but I liked this. It is open for much interpretation. I smiled Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 1:47:00 PM

If you smiled that makes my day. When the eyes start spinning around in the vogonsphere, well that makes my day too :)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/13/2016 9:27:00 AM

:-) The form name sounded vaguely familiar. After reading the definition I faintly recall reading that book a long time ago in a galaxy far far away;-). I think your poem is fun and very emodescriptive. Now, would you please write a mcwhirtle? cheerduckins! ~ john

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 12/13/2016 9:37:00 AM

It is a poetry form listed under Soup's form list. I just like the name "McWhirtle". ;-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 9:29:00 AM

LOL and thanks for the critique! What is a mcwhirtle? Will check back later...headed to work :)