Worlds Apart

Two different people from two different times Two different ways, two different lives Too big a gap to ever be crossed Too much given will be too much lost

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James Fraser

Date: 5/26/2009 2:15:00 PM

Short but very clever write Kat, so many events and history between the two, i like this, James

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/4/2009 1:10:00 PM

'Two' and 'too...' very clever! So much to think about here. 'Impossible' relationships are perhaps the ones we should pursue? Keith (PS Thanks for your comments on 'Never Say Die!' I almost died!!!!!!!!!!)

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/1/2009 8:33:00 AM

Beautiful indeed...words flow smoothly.

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/30/2009 10:01:00 PM

never too much for you. you cheeky lil' kitten this yank luvs you. you are a true writer, you write behind the lines. thanks for renting me space in that magnifecent head of yours. god bless and bless some more