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World Without Worries

World without worries Through thoughtfulness An awesome aim Greed governs governments Forlorn fight for fair future

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/23/2010 4:50:00 AM
brief poem but speaks tons of things///Just like my fav line here...very true...Greed governs governments...what is politics but a systematize and sophisticated greed...to be a politician is like a legal thief....^_^ v
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:26:00 PM
Hi Gert--awesome alliteration! It speaks of so much truth too! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/4/2010 5:27:00 PM
Congrats on this great poem being featured Rhonda Hero
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Date: 6/29/2010 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Gert. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 7:52:00 PM
Congrats, Gert, on your poem being featured this week and thank you for your nice comments on my latests.
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Date: 6/28/2010 7:44:00 PM
Congrats Gert on your featured poem this week on the Soup..molto bene amica..hope I said that right.. my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:14:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:48:00 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on homepage feature...Sara
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Date: 6/24/2010 9:55:00 PM
Interesting write, Gert, exposing the gap between ideal and reality. And yes it is an awesome aim. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poems today. Viele Grusse. Caroline.
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Date: 6/23/2010 7:33:00 AM
good thoughts, I am glad we know the end...So worries are small.
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Date: 6/23/2010 7:12:00 AM
Not only is the message on target, but the amazing alliteration brings even more power to your poem, Gert. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2010 6:38:00 AM
truth so awesomely told Gert - rgds Wilma
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Date: 6/23/2010 6:16:00 AM
Great idealism in this one..Everyone is looking for this...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/22/2010 6:11:00 AM
Wonderfully written my friend, and a pleasure to read!, best wishes, June x
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Date: 6/22/2010 5:56:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Gert. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2010 1:19:00 AM
Greed and power my friend, you are so right, awesome write, love reading your poems in english of course ahah, Harry
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:08:00 PM
Dr Ram expresses my sentiments exactly. Nice poem
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Date: 6/21/2010 6:02:00 PM
Nice alliteration without loosing the thread of expression
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