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World Turns

the world still turns, though passion burns, if the veil is crossed today, we carry the total experience learned, as our spirit wafts away.... thank you Joan Grisetti..."I Lay Dying" Don

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Date: 6/1/2012 2:10:00 PM
Don, very cool words, good message mate..Dave
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Date: 6/1/2012 8:26:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your amazing writing this morning Don. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us for many a year. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2012 10:10:00 PM
lovely poem Don
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Date: 5/31/2012 9:29:00 PM
Excellent interpretation of Joann's work! Perfectly ingenious if you ask me! I really enjoyed the line, "we carry the total experience learned," what a wonderfully insightful line! Great Work Don!!
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Date: 5/31/2012 9:15:00 PM
Love it Don!! Your work is awesome!!
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