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World Peace: the Miracle of Understanding

Wonder of wonders if God would grant one miracle to me. Over hills and dales, here and across the seas…amid: Racists, radicals, and warriors who rant worldwide, Ladies and Gentlemen: laughing loudly, in disbelief. Desire of my heart is the miracle of understanding. People, who understand, increase peace in their hearts Eternally gained wisdom that unchains love’s doors. As the miracle of miracles becomes reality, Complete eradication of angry deeds…understanding— Ending all wars

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Date: 12/24/2011 6:57:00 PM
Very good. But man has a defect - The Fall. Christ: "I say unto you; love your enemies, do good to them who hate you, pray for them who spitefully use you." That is so foriegn to fallen man's nature, it proves the deity of Christ. Yet, we should, because: there, but for the grace of God, go you and I. The Commies promised a Utopia (Eden), a workers paradise - they produced a hell on earth. That's man's efforts, apart from God. God bless you.
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Date: 12/17/2011 10:49:00 AM
This is a noble acrostic full of significant meaning, Dane. How did I miss it? Hmmm. Oh the bigots and radicals think they can tread all over peace...God will have the final say. Enjoyed. Hope u are doing well. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/14/2011 8:07:00 PM
I has been awhile since I have seen a good acrostic on this site. Yours is very impressive, and I can see why it won in the contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/14/2011 3:35:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2011 9:55:00 AM
For sure Dane this would be the miracle amoung miracles, considering the world of human logic that we live in. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/13/2011 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win, Dane Ann! One day...one fine day! Merry Christmas! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/13/2011 11:51:00 AM
This is a wonderful wish,Dane.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in the "Your Christmas Miracle" contest Dane Ann. Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations well deserved x
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Date: 12/13/2011 9:54:00 AM
Peace on Earth and an end to all war would be the miracle I would request as well, Dane. You wrote this so eloquently that it touched my heart. Congratulations on your second-place win! Love, Carolyn
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