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World of War:Vietnam

Crawling on our knees, Watch us scramble as we bleed. So much blood and sweat is seen, Life or death- there's no between. Hear the wings of the machines, Blowing air - no longer clean. Far to brave to leave the scene, Feel the never calming breeze. Watch us travel through the creeks, Watch us fix the broken leaks. Watch us make the bounds and leaps, All so you can safely sleep. By Chelsea Stufleben -------------------------------------------------------- For the contest: world of war: vietnam hosted by Miranda Lambert Placed 8th:D *this is the first contest I have ever placed in so I am very happy about this:D

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Date: 4/24/2011 5:22:00 AM
Many congratulations Chelsea on your win in Miranda's fine contest. Well done and a Happy Easter to you....:)
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:25:00 AM
Great to see you in the winner's circle Chelsea. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest, Chelsea
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Date: 4/21/2011 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Chelsea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 8:16:00 AM
Congrats Chelsea on your wonderful win in Miranda's contest with this moving account in poetry of the Vietnam War luv.. enjoy your top ten sweet success...
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:13:00 PM
U have captured the brutality of war and loss of life Chelsea in this fabulous write luv.. good luck in the contest..
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