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Workshop Poem:Disaster

Bad evils are flying in my stomach. Inferno is burning out and reaching its apex in my heart. My nitpicking mind is calculating the pain of my innocent soul. The devil is dancing on my head and making me untamed. Shadows of my inside evil is blocking the lightning way of my cheerful life. The lingering quench of my anguished soul for living happy life is some how being suppressed by the shadows of my jealousy and peculiar needs. My internal happiness is resting in peace. My lips expands to pretend as I am smiling but my heart is shrinking inside. My ears and eyes are working as spy for my mind which diverts my anguished soul. The thirst of living happy life has been knackered. The hope of changing the world has been smothered. The smoke of burning inferno inside my heart is being converted into tears and they are finding their way out by making my eyes as their exit door . Is this life? Is this world? Is this the law of nature?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/28/2016 8:33:00 AM
ENJOYING THIS ONE AGAIN. LINDA
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Date: 6/7/2015 11:29:00 PM
Sijan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/6/2015 10:51:00 PM
on another note, Sijan, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/6/2015 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations, on joining the workshop. I'm sure the crew will be here to wish you in or work on your poem :) SK
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