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Work In Progress

It can be tough, following rules I can try but may lack the tools Some may think it's a game for fools It can be tough I am confused, I think and think Perhaps easier with a drink But when I'm sober it may stink I am confused Words like weather, can always change Some I start with I rearrange A few make sense others are strange Words like weather This is the end of my small write Out of the dark into the light It may be wrong it may be right This is the end Monotetra Contest

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Debbie Knapp

Date: 6/26/2013 6:58:00 PM

You are a winner because you try and keep on trying my friend. I do not know the rules nor do I understand them.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2013 8:45:00 PM

Thanks again Debbie, the contests are what I use to sharpen and hone my skills

Richard D Seal

Date: 6/26/2013 6:09:00 PM

I think you've done very well here Rick. I still don't know one form from another and least you enter the spirit of the soup and try, which is more than I can say for me, though I have to say I miss most coz I'm just slow at writing. I do admire the prolificators. Take care, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2013 8:47:00 PM

What a great word, prolificators. You have boosted my spirits with your kind visit. Take care.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2013 2:11:00 PM

The changing moods of this work gives it much appeal... well done, richard..:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2013 4:39:00 PM

Thanks Nette, I hope you are outside enjoying a splendid day.