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Words Whisperer

You’ve swallowed my misery, My old self, just by a smile; By letting me feel the mountains move, You’ve freed me, just by a smile; My twisted thoughts, Have been untangled by you, with just a smile; I offer my body and soul to you, O my words whisperer, You’ve whispered me a new life, just by a smile; I offer myself to you O, Jamlaila, You’ve made me your man, just by a smile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 12/13/2016 4:58:00 PM
Dear Ernesto, this is a beautiful poem but it does not follow the criteria for ghazal.. PS has good examples
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