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Words Unspoken

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Words Unspoken

It can’t be the same
Once a heart has been broken
Can’t go back again
Don’t offer that peace token
Please leave your words unspoken….

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 12:59:00 PM
    tanka do not generally rhyme, but they are more about content than form, and your content in this poem is stunning, love it

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 9:42:00 PM
    Kind of easy to say, but hard to do..wanting to wail and tell the world how much you hurt. I really like your poem. BG

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/7/2013 4:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Barbara. Glad to make your acquaintance. Yes...a good wail now and then does the trick! :)
  1. Date: 4/6/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Sometimes peace and broken heart have to live side by side, even with the words unspoken. I like this, makes you think. Take care, Regards Richard

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 1:46:00 PM
    Lives truth, beautiful touching poem Eileen. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/6/2013 1:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, my dear! Thank you! I'm drained...thanks for the loving thoughts!
  1. Date: 4/6/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Hi Eileen, this is a good message. i was blind once to my x-fiances words. I now wish he would have left things unspoken. love your poem. xox..pd

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/6/2013 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear PD....sorry for the difficult time you are having and have gone through. Thanks for caring enough to post this message! Hugs!