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Words of the Heart

This is my first poem. Please tell me if I've made any stupid mistake. "I wish you were sea Flow in my heart Just you can know that You belong to me Please give me a tree I'll turn leaves to kisses My heart is the sky And you can freely fly Or hide in my memory" That's I want to say But it's just in my heart Like water under the sand You will never understand Oh! Fly my baby To find your true love I'm happy when you're happy.

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Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 3/11/2016 4:22:00 AM

Beautiful write Tu'....the only mistake would be to stop writing...Peter

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2016 6:24:00 PM

T?, I'm just stopping by to enjoy your poem. Have a wonderful day. ** LINDA**

Skat A

Date: 11/18/2015 7:47:00 PM

Hi, T Tu, thank you for sharing. Hugs... SKAT

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/4/2012 7:34:00 AM

nice write T Tu

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/1/2012 5:46:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you T?. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

T? Tú

Date: 5/1/2012 2:40:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 4/29/2012 11:47:00 PM

"My heart is the sky..." ...wow! Nice!!!

David Williams

Date: 4/29/2012 7:09:00 AM

T? welcome to the soup, nicely penned, you chose a ballad but it is more of a rhyme scheme, but it's good..keep writing, have a go at my contest, any questions just soup mail me, best of luck...David