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Words of the Body

The sensualist: she worships the flesh, the urges of bodies, secrets in lovely young eyes, wild strawberries, the ring of music, and captured happiness. © Jack Jordan, 2013

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Date: 3/28/2013 6:53:00 AM
very interesting write, Jack...I love these little jags!
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Date: 3/28/2013 7:40:00 AM
Thanks. Quite often these days short pieces are all I can manage to do, but I've come to enjoy their compactness, much like haiku, minus the formal structure. Jack
Date: 3/27/2013 9:51:00 PM
I always love reading your work. It sends my imagination on a journey each and every time.
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Date: 3/28/2013 8:44:00 AM
Thanks, Abigale. I appreciate the comment. jack
Date: 3/27/2013 12:07:00 PM
Jack, you are so good at creating a ton of interesting imagery in just a few short lines. Keep it up, my friend!
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Date: 3/27/2013 3:45:00 PM
Thanks you, Heather. I try... Jack
Date: 3/27/2013 8:36:00 AM
Straight to d point.luv it.cool.
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Date: 3/27/2013 3:44:00 PM
Thanks for the comment. Jack

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