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Poetry sad and artistic, With words like a mystic; The art of my verse is beautiful and deep, My whirling words frantic. Sometimes just heartsick, Poems, fragments of life that flow, creep; Like swirling leaves. Frozen in time verse, Writing can be a curse; Ars poetica entwined with weeping tears, Heart and soul I immerse. Tangled journey to transverse, My destiny to pen beauty is crystal clear, A whirlwind of words. ______________________________ May 21, 2015 Poetry/Rhyme/Verse/Words Frozen in Time Copyright Protected, ID 05-676-067-21 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the Standard contest, ARS Poetica Contest, sponsor, Thomas Martin, Judged 2015 First Place

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Date: 6/10/2015 2:33:00 PM
No wonder you are one of our premier poets - this piece is such a wonderful example of your brilliance! It is rated a 7!Congratulations on a well-deserved great win, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 6/9/2015 7:56:00 PM
Your poetry shows who you are. 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/9/2015 12:05:00 PM
A wonderful win Broken... SK
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Date: 6/9/2015 5:31:00 AM
Favorite lines among many: 'My whirling words frantic' and 'Ars poetica entwined with weeping tears'...WOW Constance, you are on a ROLL here...Congratulations my friend - Tim
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Date: 6/8/2015 11:30:00 PM
A BIG congrats to a well deserved win.
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Date: 6/8/2015 11:15:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:45:00 PM
Beautiful. I love the lines " Heart and soul I immerse, Tangled journey to traverse". Congratulations on your win. 7
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Date: 6/8/2015 5:09:00 PM
"A whirlwind of words" and your task to do as you so beautifully do....select and polish them to poetic brightness.
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Date: 5/27/2015 7:29:00 AM
I came across a prestigious list of the top 100 most published poets here and I am not surprise. Your quality indeed goes hand in hand with your quantity. I'll check one or two more of your works because this has given me a unique satisfaction. I give you a handshake of a definite 7!
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:29:00 AM
You are on a poetic roll, beautiful!
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Date: 5/22/2015 11:06:00 PM
What a lovely piece,I like it, excellent write.........Afolabi.
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Date: 5/22/2015 7:29:00 PM
lovely poem Connie gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 5/22/2015 6:53:00 PM
Words spun from a feeling heart. That is true poetry...Lovely Tim
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Date: 5/22/2015 5:05:00 PM
Your last few lines really sum it up well, Constance. YOUR destiny: to pen beauty!
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Date: 5/22/2015 8:07:00 AM
You make it look sooo easy! The storyline flows smoothly and the word choices are perfect. It flows like a sassy sea, carrying you to a safe harbor of completion. Nice work. Emile.
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Date: 5/21/2015 9:19:00 PM
A lovely poem, BW! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/21/2015 8:40:00 PM
Wonderful!
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