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Words Fail Me

thoughts of you release my light tonight light draws your beauty out but a fool was birthed this night thoughts of you release my light words keep me from your present sight why can’t I find a word to shout thoughts of you release my light tonight light draws your beauty out

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Date: 6/10/2016 5:57:00 PM
Like waves to the shore, the repeating lines have a beautiful rhythm.
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Date: 6/11/2016 5:45:00 AM
Thanks Jean...i guess its the idea of a triolet..

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