Words

Your words flow freely like a cascading waterfall Such beautiful writes, I can relate to them all Words that reveal the pain in your eyes The hurt you feel you cannot disguise Tender words full hopes and of dreams of romance Find the girl of your dreams, then take a chance I am honoured to find such a treasured friend Together lets hope our dreams never end Jan Allison 8th September 2014

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Gary Dye

Date: 9/30/2014 11:52:00 AM

WOW

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2014 12:04:00 PM

Thanks Gary I appreciate your lovely comment:-) :-) hugs jan xxx

Vera Duggan

Date: 9/9/2014 7:00:00 PM

Great write Jan, absolutely love the rhyming, how are you my friend, will SM you soon. Take care...................Vera......

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 4:43:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Vera hope you had a lovely break XXX Jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/9/2014 4:17:00 PM

A very great write Jan!! You actually say so much with very few words in your tribute here. I noted in the comments below that you're from Birmingham in the UK. My last name is English in origin, although I'm American. My father's family came from England and my mother's from Ireland, but all a long, long time ago. We've not been able to reconnect in either country with any potential long lost relatives. Enjoyed your work here -- as usual. All the Best. Cheers, Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 4:23:00 PM

Thanks so much for the wonderful comment Gary. I am sure with research you could trace your family tree - we have a friend who does genealogy and he has been able to find family details for me to take to Paul Callas - his wife had relations on the Isle of Man where I now live :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2014 3:52:00 PM

just stopping by to say hi. Wish I had time to search for a poem of yours. but rushed as usual and I 've seen all your latest posts!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 3:57:00 PM

Thanks as ever for your support my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser

Date: 9/9/2014 3:19:00 PM

Just goes to show that friends aren't always at arms length. This makes me smile so much as it'll appeal to others who know they have similar friends. For me, it's been a pleasure to know you through this tiny little screen of life Jan - James :) xx :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 3:33:00 PM

James your poems inspire me and some really amuse me - we share a love of music which is an added bonus :-) I have some lovely friends on here I am truly blessed:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/9/2014 12:43:00 PM

Very beautiful tribute to a friend Jan. Such a lovely poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 3:16:00 PM

Thanks Brenda Tim has been such a lovely friend and so supportive to me i wanted to do a poem to show my appreciation:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/9/2014 11:59:00 AM

a beautiful tribute to Tim i am guessing. i am so happy the friendships made here that keep our hearts in place. Tim is such a wonderful man. i swear Jan somedays i worry his heart is going to fall right off his sleeves. as Tim would say...cheers!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/9/2014 4:05:00 PM

Yes I do. Just around my corner is Maple Street.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 3:56:00 PM

You never know who or what is around the next corner Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/9/2014 3:34:00 PM

there's the rub, if they could?

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 3:14:00 PM

Yes its written for my lovely friend Tim - he is a tower of strength to me both on and off soup... I guess there would be many ladies lining up to catch his heart if they could:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/9/2014 8:04:00 AM

I think I know whom you are talking to..:) it's Tim right..:) yes I'm praying too that soon a woman from God will jail his heart with love and will last forevermore :) sweet Jan sweet..:)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 10:48:00 AM

Ohh Olive jail his heart with love - I hope he finds the lady of his dreams soon - think many ladies here would love to meet him:-) . He truly is a wonderful friend and I am blessed by his care and support both on and off soup:-) hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2014 5:54:00 AM

I so relish this tender write, jan...I bet tim will be inspired... nothing like friendship.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 7:38:00 AM

Tim has been an incredible friend to me both on and off soup - what better way to honour a friend than in a poem:-) Hugs jan xxx

James Horn

Date: 9/9/2014 3:49:00 AM

Short, sweet, simple, lovely, adorable, attractive and long will live in my heart. Aren't you from Wales with a lot of tales and poems to tell you lads and lassies? Do you remember where that is from? But one thing. More like a treasure trove in PoetrySoup. Jim Horn

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 7:38:00 AM

I don't know where its from James but I will google when I have time - but I'm actually from Birmingham in the UK:-) hugs Jan xx

Keith Merritt

Date: 9/9/2014 12:57:00 AM

A sweetly wistful write...I'd like to find the girl of dreams, but a friend is to be treasured. Thank you for inspiring me, my new-found muse !

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 1:02:00 AM

Most definitely Keith - I have some amazing friends all over the world all due to Poetry Soup:-) Hope you meet the girl of your dreams too. Hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/8/2014 8:52:00 PM

Writing buddies are good buddies to have

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 1:01:00 AM

They are Frederic... its amazing the friendship, comfort and support we all get from people all over the world I never expected it when I joined soup - its the best place in the world for making new friends:-) Hugs Jan x

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/8/2014 6:21:00 PM

sweet beautiful words excellent piece

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 12:56:00 AM

Thanks Liam :-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2014 6:04:00 PM

So this one was for Tim? You guys have become very good amigos!! A cute poem, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 12:56:00 AM

Yes Andrea hes such a lovely supportive friend both on and off soup :-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/8/2014 5:14:00 PM

Aww. ....thanks sweetie......a million hugs Tim Always your friend :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2014 5:15:00 PM

My pleasure:-) If we ever meet i will expect you to honour that Tim! Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/8/2014 5:07:00 PM

aww Jan you are the sweetest. You are gonna get big hugs for this, you know that right. Hugs from me too. its another love fest tonight, we need that right. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2014 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Cas - yes BIG hugs all round - I am still laughing at being a mousky tear and as for your footles OMG ... at least I can't be blamed for being naughty with those ones got tears here still:-) Hugs Jan xx