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We meet on equal playing fields, we strivers wielding pens, with timid hopes, exposing thoughts to harsh or candid critique. The selfsame words are ours to use in manner of our choices. They lay in helpless, inert piles until maneuvered by our pens. Just as the paint and brush await the artists soulful touch or notes without composer's skill are only noisy sounds; just so a simple word can be an ignored out of fashion thing, until lifted by the poet's skill into phrases for the ages. Some have used proud words in prayer that others use in curses. We poets take them charily and in literature we mold them. The gifted take a simple word and recognize its virtue, They can combine, connect and phrase as no one has before them. Dear Reader, take these offered words and mentally assess them. The author hopes the unity of thought will have made them worth writing and reading. (Reworked and expanded July 30th, 2014 From short rhymed poem written earlier and named Mystery of Words.)

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:15:00 AM
Joyce, well done on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/23/2016 4:03:00 AM
Thank you for your words xxxxx
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Date: 4/19/2016 10:28:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Joyce..
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Date: 4/19/2016 3:47:00 PM
Hi Joyce, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 4/19/2016 3:17:00 PM
well done congrats x
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Date: 4/19/2016 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce
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Date: 8/20/2014 1:36:00 AM
Well done Joyce... Belated congratulations on your win... Verlena
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Date: 8/6/2014 10:31:00 PM
NICE WIN...PD
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Date: 8/4/2014 3:48:00 PM
Back again to applaud your win :) Hugs :)
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:48:00 AM
Congrats...Sara
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:44:00 PM
ah words, Joyce, how grateful we are for them. beautiful write :)
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Date: 8/2/2014 6:04:00 PM
Words can make or break us just according to how they are used..Great expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/2/2014 10:47:00 AM
Dear Joyce, indeed it is the words, the thoughts behind them and the way we use them that connect us in poetry. Hon, this is a beautiful poem and it means a lot to your target audience here. Have a wonderful weekend, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/2/2014 9:47:00 AM
I love you words about writing...beautiful Joyce...hugs Tim
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:28:00 AM
YES, that is exactly it what you said in that one line: we MOLD words. I love that about writing and poetry!!
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:18:00 AM
And back again with huge congrats Joyce on this very thoughtful write!
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:56:00 PM
well, I would never have guessed this poem was yours, joyce! I was judging this contest primarily on imagery, so this poem placed rather lower than I would have liked, but I simply had to place it because I liked what you had to say about the act of writing poetry, and it is very well expressed and put together...in any other contest of mine it would have placed higher; just a little lacking in the imagery that I was looking for, but congrats on your win all the same! :)
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:14:00 PM
Joyce, I enjoyed this very much. I love words and think of them as bricks and mortar with which I build a structure that reveals my heart and mind. You put this all together beautifully. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:50:00 PM
Joyce, your words are always golden......this is filled with wonderful wisdom and always so worth reading!
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Date: 7/31/2014 7:37:00 AM
Wonderful write Joyce ! Words r indeed a treasure we hv ! Keep digging for more,, keep craving for more !!
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Date: 7/30/2014 8:33:00 PM
i was surprised to read a non-rhyming poem from you joyce, but i enjoyed it very much. your words were definitely worth reading!
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Date: 7/30/2014 7:34:00 PM
Words are a gift that poets use to express everything! we are so lucky to be able to mold our words and you do so very my sweetheart :) hugs!
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Date: 7/30/2014 4:03:00 PM
Lovely poem Joyce! Words are a precious gift and it is up to us to make the best use of them, in whatever context or situation we find ourselves in. (Am reminded of song "Words" by the Bee Gees...sometimes its only words that we have to express our love...) Take care. // paul
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Date: 8/2/2014 5:25:00 AM
Hi Joyce! back for another read and with congrats on your fine win!

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